Just trying to gauge opinion here: where would you put commas in this sentence?
A few years ago the subject barely interested me but in common with many people my age I have now seen the light.
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Just trying to gauge opinion here: where would you put commas in this sentence?
A few years ago the subject barely interested me but in common with many people my age I have now seen the light.
So as not to influence subsequent posters, please put your answer in spoiler tags.
Thanks.
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A few years ago, the subject barely interested me; but, in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light
[SPOILER]A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age I have now seen the light.
I wrote it this way because I know I’m overly fond of commas and try to economize…so just one.
I’m not sure why you don’t say “but like many people…” The phrase “in common with” seems awkward.
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A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
Also, I considered putting another one after “A few years ago,” but it made the sentence sound too choppy.
A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but, in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
I’d punctuate almost exactly as Annie-Xmas has, omitting the semicolon.
[spoiler]A few years ago the subject barely interested me. But in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
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With maybe another one after
ago
Sorry, I know you didn’t ask for periods, but it really seems like a run-on without breaking it up. I think maybe some people would use a semi-colon but I’ve never gotten the hang of them myself. Never use 'em.
A few years ago, the subject barely interested me; but, in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
ETA:
I see I share Annie-Xmas’s views on the subject.
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I’d punctuate almost exactly as Annie-Xmas has, omitting the semicolon.
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I’d replace the semicolon with a comma.
A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
A few years ago the subject barely interested me but, in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
I can’t make up my mind whether there could be a semi-colon prior to “but”, or indeed whether “but” could be replaced by a semi-colon.
To rewrite the sentence so it reads better (IMHO/YMMV):
The subject barely interested me a few years ago. However, like many people my age, I have now seen the light
BrainGlutton, where are you? C’mon and weigh in.
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To rewrite the sentence so it reads better (IMHO/YMMV):
The subject barely interested me a few years ago. However, like many people my age, I have now seen the light
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Perfect.
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Perfect.
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Thank you. Even I believe I am a natural writer. I hate reading sloppy writing.
I’m with Struan. I’d say that if you have a comma after “age” you must have one before “in”.
[SPOILER]A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
A case could be made for putting a comma after “ago”, but to me that makes the sentence too choppy. Also, I debated on whether or not I should even put the one after “age”. I decided to, obviously.[/SPOILER]
A few years ago, the subject barely interested me, but, in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.
FWIW, I would re-write that sentence before bothering with the commas.
Two commas: A few years ago**,** the subject barely interested me**,** but in common with many people my age I have now seen the light.
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“A few years ago the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.”
I might use:
“A few years ago, the subject barely interested me, but in common with many people my age, I have now seen the light.”
if I wished to emphasize the “a few years ago”, rather than blast right past it as yo would without the comma.[/spoiler]