Warning: I am trying to put together the most hyperbolic story ever written. I’m not looking for a debate, but I am looking for factual advice on how to make this story better.
Backstory: My brother and I have been engaged in an e-mail debate for a few days. I said that McBush’s plan to suspend summer gas taxes was a bad idea in the long run. He responded that it’s not, and that I’m a liberal who wants to take money from the hard-working rich and give it to the lazy poor. (total non-sequitor, BTW, but I decided to run with it.)
This is his last e-mail to me (not counting the one with a bunch of pictures of Obama’s paternal family.)
Over the last hour or so I have concocted the following story while drinking beer. I would like for help (mostly factual, but pure hyperbole is requested as well) in making it better. Here is what I have so far:
Let’s take the case of a CEO who makes $100 million a year, and another guy who makes $8 an hour ($16k a year). It’s probably not fair that the CEO, who has spent years in college and works hard making tough decisions, has to pay $38 - $50 million in taxes, while the other guy basically breaks even, tax-wise. What would be more fair would be for them both to pay 30% (ie. the CEO keeps $70 million and the worker keeps $11.2k, instead of all $16k). The problem with that is that it’s really hard to feed a family on $11.2k, and the CEO’s family isn’t going to starve if he only brings home $50 mil.
“You shouldn’t have kids if you only make $8 an hour” you might say, and I’d say you are right. But the Republicans don’t like people having abortions, and the girl that he fell in love with happened to have been raped by her own father. She would have gotten an abortion, but since she was 16, that required parental consent. Daddy decided that no girl of his was getting an abortion, because they were good Republicans who hated abortion and niggers as much as they love Jesus.
But she met Jimmy, and he treated her and her baby well, so they got away from her father and got married. [because they happened to be of opposite sex, they had that luxury, at least.] After a few years, they decided to have another baby, because he was making $15/hour and looking at a promotion. He also had health insurance, because Clinton forced his company to give it to him. Halfway through the pregnancy they found out that the fetus was most likely going to have Down’s Syndrome. But because Republicans had declared that 2nd term abortions are illegal for any reason, they had no choice but to have the baby.
They were scraping by. Their company’s insurance program refused to pay for any medical care for the baby, because, it turns out that having DS is a “pre-existing condition”. There were social programs (setup by Democrats trying to destroy the country) that helped care for the baby that helped them scrape by.
Then Bush II got elected, and the economy promptly went to sh*t. His boss, (the afore-mentioned CEO) decided to outsource 1000 jobs, including his, to India. That saved the company $20,000,000 a year, and the CEO was rewarded for his stewardship with a $5 million bonus, of which the poor guy had to pay nearly half of in taxes.
At this time, Jimmy’s only option to feed his family was to join the Army. He went to Iraq, and after a few months, he stepped on a land mine. So he got sent back home, and was discharged from the Army, with no medical care. He got a job that he could do from a wheelchair (working in a gas station) making $8 an hour.
The irony of the situation is that the CEO actually works from a wheelchair himself. (Not because he can’t walk, but because he decided that he’s too rich to have to. He pays a guy, who still has legs, $8.50 an hour to wheel him around.)