An Earnest Sermon Concerning A Dreadful Moral Peril, by A Stern Victorian Moralist

Friends, I am here today to warn you of a most pernicious and deadly evil. Any women, children, or men of weak constitution who may be present should consider leaving, lest my descriptions of this heinous abuse offend their delicate sensibilities. Be warned, I cannot be held responsible for fainting, hysteria, dropsy, mass panic, vapors, the augue, syphilis, or any other ailment resulting from those of sensitive disposition who ignore my warnings.

Now, of what abuse am I speaking? I do not speak of child abuse. I do not speak of spousal abuse. My concern is not the abuse of animals nor of the elderly, nor substance abuse, nor the abuse of power. I speak, today, of adverb abuse. Yes, shocking, I know, but for the sake of Western Civilization, please hear me out! I have in front of me a book, a vile, dastardly book. It is called “A Drink with Shane MacGowan,” and it reeks of sulphur (and Guinness). It is written by a woman claiming to be one Victoria Mary Clarke, but I suspect, and you shall soon see why, that this is merely a facade for Beelzebub himself!

I warn you, I am about to qoute a passage from this book. Only stout Christian gentlemen, solid in their faith, should read on. Only a strong belief in the eternal love of Christ Our Lord can provide the spiritual bulwark necessary to look on this abomination without losing the very will to live:

“A rugged Irish cottage. A fierce and loquacious wind tears, mercilessly, mirthlessly, at the simple thatched roof. An immodest fire illuminates the shadows, boldly. Out of the ashes, a luminous face looms, magnificently. A trembling hand taps a cigarette, certainly, on a filthy trouser leg. Another, equally pale and blackened, grasps a bottle of gin, either half full or half empty, depending on which way you look at it. Shane MacGowan, leaning back against the whitewashed wall, contemplates the portrait of Pope John, contemplativly, spits into the flames, contentedly, clears his throat, aridly, and addresses his companion.”

Please, now! Please stay calm! Remain in your seats! I know it is awful, but try to maintain your decorum. We must not panic! Do not dignify this evil with loosened cravats or unkempt hair! I know that, in that entire paragraph, only three lonely verb are unmodified. I know that, at one point, Mr. MacGowan is descriped as contemplating a picture contemplativly. We must retain our senses, however, for our path shall become much rougher. Observe!

“His companion, Victoria, a fragile, ethereal beauty, the likes of which will never be seen again, nods anxiously and swallows delcately. Shane eyes her, insistently, and continues.”

Shocking, very shocking, but we must not run riot because of this. My assisstant is passing around a restorative of straight bourbon and cocaine, please use as much as you need to calm your nerves. Note that the “Victoria” in that passage is the very authoress herself! Humility has never been a trait ascribed to the devil. I will not qoute at length any further, for no human could sustain another dosage of adverbial hooliganism like that. But, so that you all might understand the depths of depravity to which this book sinks, I will repeat some of the author’s litany of more minor offenses. In the next ten pages, the innocent reader is assaulted by “coughs, mightily”, “drinks, heartily,” “sips, daintily,” “leans forward, suddenly,” “clasps, tentativly,” “pales, considerably,” “smiles, agreeably,” “snorts, acrimoniously,” “takes a swig, acerbically,” “nods, knowingly,” “glances…, occasionally,” a wind that “rattles the … door …, ambulatorily,” “contemplates, silently,” “smiles, faithfully,” “agrees, instinctivly,” “eyes a picture of JFK, respectfully,” “leers, intrigingly,” “pauses, reflectivly,” and a return of the wind, which now “rattles the door, affectionatly.”

Please! Calm yourselves, please! I have a revolver, and I will use it if I must! Back! BACK! There, that’s better. Please remember you are Christian gentlemen, not a bunch of painted Hottentots, and behave accordingly!

Now, I know that some libertines might defend this filth, claiming that it if an adult wants to pollute his mind than that is his buisness, and we have no right to dictate his behavior. To them I say, “Poppycock and balderdash!” And I mean that in the strongest possible terms! What of the children, I ask you, who are drawn to this book by its innocent tales of drunkeness, drug use, sex, and violence? What terrible effects could this sort of execrable writing have on their tender souls? If we do not stand against this darkness, if we do not charge into the breach to defend our most defenseless citizens, who will? If we do not shoulder this terrible burden God has laid on us, how shall we look ourselves in the mirror every morn?

Well, the hour is becoming late, and I will let you good men return to your beds, although I doubt any of you will find rest there. Before we take our leave of each other, the Reverend Mr. Michael Palin will lead us in prayer.

O Lord,
Oo, you are so big, so absolutely huge.
Gosh, we’re all really impressed down here, I can tell you.
Forgive us, O Lord, for this our dreadful toadying,
But your so strong and just, well, super.
Amen.

Goodnight, Gentlemen, and God Bless.

That irritates me, thoroughly.

I think we’re going to need a restorative much, much more potent than bourbon and cocaine. Let me just say that I have found in that paragraph the most malicious writing I have ever seen. Clearly, this prose was never intended to be used as entertainment, but as a weapon. Copies of the book in question will be dropped over the enemy’s institutes of higher learning, where unsuspecting intellectuals will read them and subsequently suffer massive cerebral hemorrhages. I don’t believe in censorship for any reason, but my beliefs are being put to the test here.

Not only is this woman abusing the privilege to use adverbs, she is twisting them to new and evil purposes with every sentence. I tell you, man was never meant to play God with adverbs! They have their god-given meanings and applications, and this foulness would pervert their power to create travesties such as this!

Excuse me, I have a really monstrous headache from that.

Apparently, Publishers Weekly agrees:

Let this be a forewarning to all self-respecting pop pinups and rock stars pondering penning an autobiography or memoir: do not, as former Pogues singer and lyricist MacGowan and his writer-wife Clarke did, use a question-and-answer format. This collaboration, the couple’s first, is an especially unfortunate publishing fatality because MacGowan’s life is such a juicy subject, and its exaggerated, grandiosely booze- and drug-littered escapades and cameos by Sid Vicious, Johnny Rotten and Elvis Costello are worthy of a second look. After drinking his first stout at the tender age of five with the milkman, MacGowan went on to play a major role in London’s punk scene in the mid- and late 1970s. Later, he founded the Irish band The Pogues, which merged Irish folk styles with rock and roll. (MacGowan has also recorded with the Popes and on his own.) However, the book’s Q&A format blends these and other adventures with inane revelations (“I’ve been a lover and a hater of beetroot all my life”), petty spats, ridiculous questions (“Tell me more about Matt Dillon”) and contrived, self-flattering stage directions (“Victoria, radiant as ever, in pale green silk which becomes her consumes a plate of chips, hungrily”). 16 b&w photos not seen by PW. (June)Forecast: Booksellers shouldn’t expect rocking numbers, for it’s doubtful that even most diehard fans will find this unedited banter between MacGowan and his missus stimulating.

Please, please, please tell me that was just a typo, for you seem far more linguistically knowledgeable than the misuse of that word implies[sup]*[/sup].

With all of the great writers we have here at SD who are having a bitch of a time getting published, reading this drivel makes me very, very sad. And my eyes hurt now, too, thankyouverymuch. I have to go wash them now.

[sup][sub]*Sorry, that’s just one of my biggest grammar pet peeves.[/sub][/sup]


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Drat! The insidious fingers of Satan have wormed their way even into my saintly prose. I meant “then,” not “than,” of course. One unfortunate mis-step, and my sublime and erudite rant is reduced to the level of a drunken Irish reprobate railing against the county bailiff. O, the shame of it all.

Yep, my sensibilities are offended. Pass the bourbon.

Miller:

Look around your local library and find a copy of one of Mark Twain’s works that contains the short story “A Cure For The Blues”. If you’re lucky, it may also have the short story “Fenimore Cooper’s Literary Offenses” in it. Between the two of these, you will wind up on the floor rolling with laughter.

Up with this we shall not put!

Ew.

Ucky.

puke smilie

Good grief! That woman could give Bulwer-Lytton a run for his money.

Someday, there will be a Victoria Mary Clarke Contest.

[sermonically]
Fear not, brethren and sistern. The LORD is coming in righteous judgement, righteously, to cast such as her into the outer darkness, where there shall be wailing, lamentingly, and gnashing of teeth, grindingly.

May he tarry tardily not!
[/sermonically]

I just wanted to say, that is a GREAT line!

That’s just wonderful.

No, really. I’ve just been planning lessons for next year’s high school English class, including how to use adverbs wisely and avoid using them foolishly.

I’m going to try to find this book at my Friendly Neighborhood Library. It sounds trememdously helpful.

Up with which I shall not put – Churchill dixit

Well, I looked up Shane McGowan on Google and I still have no clear idea of who he is.

Is it important?

Are there no editors?

Any idiot who goes about with “eyes her, insistently” on his lips should be boiled with his own manuscript and buried with a comma through his heart.

I may vomit, copiously.

Try looking up Shane MacGowan instead.

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How is it that writing of such piss-poor quality can find a publisher?

Must…scrub…brain.