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Old 11-27-2009, 02:11 PM
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Originally Posted by CookingWithGas View Post
I think the usage does not communicate clearly what the author is trying to convey. When I first read the OP I read that line three or four times trying to figure out what the author was saying. I don't think that was the intent of the author, so by definition it is poor usage (though perhaps not "incorrect").
Yeah, I have no idea what it's trying to say even now. There's poetic license but in this case it results in the sentence having no real meaning.