I’m writing an informal response* of a poem for my intro level American Lit class and I have a question about how to quote correctly in instances when I want to allude to a line in a poem, but would also like to change the verb tense to fit with the flow of my paper. Specifically, I’m quoting the line “we binge and purge” (from S. A. Griffin’s “I Ate Fig Newtons Until I Puked” and would like to say, “I don’t think he’s referring to a proper relationship, more of an on again-off again friends-with-benefits sort of thing, with binging and purging.” Please, I’m not looking for comments on the sentence quality itself, just the proper way to quote a writer while changing the verb tense.
Thanks!
*The responses for this class are only a page long, double spaced. Their main purpose is to make sure that we’ve put some sort of thought into what we’ve read and they aren’t actually graded for grammar. So long as you have a basic command of capitalization and end punctuation, you won’t really be graded against for incorrect grammar. I’m mostly just asking this question because I’m curious.