# Anyone want to read my first short sci fi story?

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Created:** [April 28, 2003, 8:17pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762 "2003-04-28T20:17:15Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![Aro](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/b3f665/32.png) [@Aro](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Aro)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 2:49pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/21 "2003-04-29T14:49:23Z")

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Actually, no its not. I’ve just noticed that. Doh!

Okay, can you send it to me at [aro\_hill@hotmail.com](mailto:aro_hill@hotmail.com)

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 3:54pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/22 "2003-04-29T15:54:48Z")

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It is on it’s way Aro.

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**Author:** ![DaToad](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/67e7ee/32.png) [@DaToad](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/DaToad)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 3:59pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/23 "2003-04-29T15:59:46Z")

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Why of course I would like to read it. My profile e-mail address is current.  
Thanks,  
DT

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 4:07pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/24 "2003-04-29T16:07:11Z")

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Ok, DaToad. Am I gonna get any feedback anytime soon? It really is a short story.

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**Author:** ![Cisco](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ccd318/32.png) [@Cisco](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Cisco)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 6:57pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/25 "2003-04-29T18:57:38Z")

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Do you have aol or aim dorkusmalorkusmafia? I’d love to read your story and give it an amateur’s critiquing, but I don’t want to post my email address here for a few stupid reasons and I can’t send outgoing mail.

Hit me on aim if you can. SN = cisc0

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 8:21pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/26 "2003-04-29T20:21:37Z")

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Unfortunately, I don’t have AIM or AOL. You can email me at my SDMB screenname at yahoo dot com.

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**Author:** ![zorch](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/50afbb/32.png) [@zorch](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/zorch)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 9:43pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/27 "2003-04-29T21:43:11Z")

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Another sci-fier here. Love to see it.

[zorch@siutao.net](mailto:zorch@siutao.net)

Thanks.

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 9:48pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/28 "2003-04-29T21:48:18Z")

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Everyone should have it now save Cisco. It is very short, so I hope to see some feedback sometime.

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**Author:** ![scotandrsn](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a4c791/32.png) [@scotandrsn](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/scotandrsn)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 10:26pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/29 "2003-04-29T22:26:10Z")

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no

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**Author:** ![Mr.Frink](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/977dab/32.png) [@Mr.Frink](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Mr.Frink)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 10:33pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/30 "2003-04-29T22:33:28Z")

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Me Too!

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**Author:** ![Cisco](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ccd318/32.png) [@Cisco](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Cisco)\
**Post date:** [April 29, 2003, 11:26pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/31 "2003-04-29T23:26:36Z")

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If anyone who has it also has aim or aol please send me an IM :).

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 2:51am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/32 "2003-04-30T02:51:43Z")

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Sent to Mr. Frink. I had a friend try to talk to Cisco but he didn’t get through.

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**Author:** ![Dunderman](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/ecb155/32.png) [@Dunderman](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Dunderman)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 6:19am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/33 "2003-04-30T06:19:01Z")

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I’d like to see it too. The profile email works.

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**Author:** ![Cisco](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ccd318/32.png) [@Cisco](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Cisco)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 10:50am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/34 "2003-04-30T10:50:12Z")

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> [@](#):
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> \*Originally posted by dorkusmalorkusmafia \*  
> \*\*Sent to Mr. Frink. I had a friend try to talk to Cisco but he didn’t get through. \*\*

I was passed out ☹ . Sorry 'bout that.

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**Author:** ![LowerLip](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/839c29/32.png) [@LowerLip](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/LowerLip)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 12:10pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/35 "2003-04-30T12:10:57Z")

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**dorkusmalorkusmafia**

Why not put your copy on a web page. That way viewers can go to it and read it and then send comments to you. In this way, you wouldn’t have to mail a copy each time a new viewer requests it.

Just a thought.

LL

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 2:09pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/36 "2003-04-30T14:09:24Z")

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I would rather know exactly who has it, LowerLip. And it has been sent to Priceguy too.

Thanks Viva for your input.

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**Author:** ![Sock\_Munkey](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/aeb1de/32.png) [@Sock\_Munkey](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Sock_Munkey)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 2:23pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/37 "2003-04-30T14:23:11Z")

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Do you want the feedback here for discussion or should we email our comments to you?

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 2:51pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/38 "2003-04-30T14:51:32Z")

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Hmm, Please email it back to me. 🙂  
Thanks Sock.

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**Author:** ![Cisco](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ccd318/32.png) [@Cisco](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Cisco)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 3:13pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/39 "2003-04-30T15:13:24Z")

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Send it to [jizz\_master\_zer0@hotmail.com](mailto:jizz_master_zer0@hotmail.com) that’s my “fake” email address that I use when I don’t want my real account to get spammed.

(My “real” email address also contains my real first and last name and I just don’t care to post that here for various reasons :))

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**Author:** ![dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/dorkusmalorkusmafia/32/7266_2.png) [@dorkusmalorkusmafia](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/dorkusmalorkusmafia)\
**Post date:** [April 30, 2003, 3:21pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/anyone-want-to-read-my-first-short-sci-fi-story/171762/40 "2003-04-30T15:21:58Z")

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Got it sent to you Cisco…or should I say, Jizzmaster. LOL great name!

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