# Boyo Jim and other prose Nazis: get the fuck over yourselves.

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**Created:** [May 15, 2013, 3:44pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/boyo-jim-and-other-prose-nazis-get-the-fuck-over-yourselves/658411 "2013-05-15T15:44:18Z")\
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**Author:** ![Suil\_Dubh](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/85f322/32.png) [@Suil\_Dubh](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Suil_Dubh)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2013, 3:01pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/boyo-jim-and-other-prose-nazis-get-the-fuck-over-yourselves/658411/74 "2013-05-16T15:01:18Z")

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> [@Asking This Girl Out After Her Breakup](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/asking-this-girl-out-after-her-breakup/658291/33):
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> The OP could pass a spelling and grammar test, but as a storyteller he sucks. He reads like a bright 12 year old rather than an adult. Perhaps I was overly critical given that it is considerably better than many first time posters. But I was really surprised to read that he is about to leave college rather than enter it.

Boyo Jim  
Critiqued a post  
With fervor and with unction  
His main complaint  
The OP’s screed  
Showed narrative dysfunction  
Alas for Jim  
His own post has  
Its own special malfunction  
His last line starts  
Incorrectly with  
A coordinating conjunction

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