Torture? Secret Prisions? That’s not news. No one cares about this stuff. Next, Natlee Halloway is still missing, no doubt because of the dutch.
Thanks for the help. I appreciate it, everyone who helped me out here, John in particular which would be everyone except Clothahump(whose general direction I fart in).
What brought this on? He asked for a critique, I gave him one. Perhaps you should try reading the OP’s request before submitting your entry in the Jackass Of The Day contest.
I thought the “Constructive” was implied, but I guess I’m going to have to spell it out for those who can’t comprehend that. Your suggestion was not constructive in the least.
A “critique” is an analysis that points out flaws (or strengths) of a piece. Your post did neither. Furthermore, in this case, an explicit request was made for “some tips on how to make this better”. Had you rebutted any of the points made in the letter, be they substantive, grammatical, or stylistic, I would not have responded in the manner I did. The lack of any substance whatsoever in your response points to a dearth of reasoning skills on your part, combined with a desire to offend. Which, in my mind, is one operant definition of “dick”.
Dick.
There’s a difference between “critiqueing” and “mocking.” Here’s a hint: the reactions you get everytime you open your big mouth? That’s mocking. I suppose if that’s all you’ve ever heard in your life (and judging by your posts, I don’t see how it could be otherwise) it’s understandable that you can’t tell the difference between the two.