# Critique my Teemings story:

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/critique-my-teemings-story/117823>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Created:** [July 7, 2002, 10:18pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/critique-my-teemings-story/117823 "2002-07-07T22:18:25Z")\
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**Author:** ![Roadwalker](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/e19b73/32.png) [@Roadwalker](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Roadwalker)\
**Post date:** [July 7, 2002, 10:18pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/critique-my-teemings-story/117823/1 "2002-07-07T22:18:25Z")

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I had so much fun writing this story.[http://www.teemings.com/issue11/formal.html](http://www.teemings.com/issue11/formal.html)  
that I am working on fixing up a story that I wrote about 5 years ago. I write because I love to write, but I guess having people read what I have written is cool too. Let me have any criticisms, suggestions for how to tell a story, or just give it up.  
I would appreciate any help. Thanks