Although I can find a few problems, let me say I very much like “Demon Haunted World” and the baloney detection kit and encourage people to read it (them).
Things I would add:
We ought to make it a serious moral obligation to see to it that we make every effort to avoid false beliefs. I think much of the book supports this but it is not specifically in the baloney detection kit, and we will never detect baloney if we don’t see it as a serious priority. Most of the world’s most grave problems are caused by people who adopt false beliefs, resulting in war, terrorism, genocide, bigotry, and other horrors.
Next I would add an avoidance of polarization - becoming emotionally attached to one side of an issue. When we regard those we disagree with as enemies who are supporting “evil” we lose our objectivity and our ability to objectively evaluate the pros and cons of an issue.
We need to be deeply suspicious of virtually everything that is even slightly controversial, even (especially) if it agrees with our preconceived notions. We can memorize long lists of logical fallicies, but if we aren’t suspicious of things we hear, we will never notice them.
Some nitpics on specific detection kit items:
I don’t think “argument from adverse consequences” is a fallacy. Obviously if an action has adverse consequences, that is a good reason for not taking the action. The examples Sagan gives fail for other reasons.
“Special pleading” strikes me as far too vague to be a useful complaint. He gives examples involving free will and “God acts in mysterious ways”. The latter is an argument from ignorance, and “free will” is such a poorly defined concept that I don’t feel any argument should be made based on it.
One of Sagan’s examples of “statistics of small numbers” involves not knowing any Chinese despite one out of five people being Chinese. This is a problem of a skewed sample, not a small sample.
I have a website, www.truthpizza.org that gives my personal slant on critical thinking.
Despite my minor criticisms, I still think “Demon Haunted World” and the baloney detection kit are excellent reading for everyone.