I hope that you’re quitting this project only in order to pursue OTHER painting challenges! You really show some improvement from your first painting to your second - take a look at that! Give yourself some credit!
I like your diligence and care. That woodpile on the side of the house is delightful!
I like the way you pursued more saturated tones in your second piece, and the way you placed it on the page. It’s more confident.
Those tree shadows are really terrific! The grass is beautiful. Your sunset works so well!
I get the feeling that maybe the tree forms gave you fits? I find it really difficult to invent trees - whenever I do, they tend to be very regular and not spontaneous. Like filling out a pattern, rather than actually seeing what’s there. My patterns aren’t at all interesting, unfortunately. That’s why I have to actually LOOK at something in order to draw or paint it.
If you tried this again, I think you’ have more luck if you didn’t make your tree trunks entirely black. The backside of a silhouetted tree usually reflects some light. Yours could do so from the grass, or from the house.
I’ll tell you something else that I think is a better sign than you realize – see the way you left the lower right-hand corner unfinished? That tall, narrow triangle? You might not believe me, but I think that’s actually a really good choice and a sign of a good eye. Had you continued the green all the way off the page there, it would be too strong. You needed something to send the eye back into the picture, to counteract those two paths and the tree shadows – there’s a whole bunch of elements in your piece that send the eye down and out. Leaving that triangle creates a “stopping” point.
When you get a little better at drawing, you’ll be able to make the negative space in your tree branches carry more weight, more impact, and they’ll bring the eye back into the piece. You have better color skills than drawing skills. They’re very different learning processes.
Great job!
I found a house that I really want to paint for you guys, it’s right near a little creek (my girlfriends said I totally cheated by not having a building in my last efforts :D). Soon as I get a chance, I’ll give it a go. And then look forward to your comments!