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Sorry – premature submititis.
To clarify: I don’t think it was her intention to write sci-fi at all, so I don’t think she can be faulted for writing “bad” sci-fi – it was totally her intention to explore the relationship of these two people in the context of, um, well, the fact that one was a time-traveler. You may recall I was the first to mention the book in this thread – and I qualified that it was a literary work, not a sci-fi work.
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Well, if that’s the case, things would have gone down easier without her double-speak about what was happening to Henry.
Don’t get me wrong, I’m not trying to claim that to be good fiction a book should conform to any kind of genre standards. But if one is going to go partway into a genre, and I do contend that TTW is at least partially an SF work - if for no other reason than the author’s attempt to provide ‘scientific’ explainations for the more outre parts of the story - one’s work can be judged by those standards. And, more than anything else, it was the explainations that bothered me most, and were the cause of more than one incidence of being kicked out of the story, because my BS meter pegged high.
[spoiler]For an example of what I mean - do you remember the incident when Henry leaves his fillings, as well as his clothes behind? And Claire explains that he can’t take any non-living matter with him? At that point I was wondering why Henry isn’t bald - since hair is non-living, at least at the point where it exits the skin. Other concerns would include finger and toenails, skin, and possibly teeth.
Similarly, the whole ‘genetic clock’ explaination later on in the book bothered me - it got me thinking about what Henry was actually doing enough to consider little things like how, in order for Henry to pass through time so much, he also had to have some kind of absolute locator for the Earth - otherwise he’d end up in outer space, and die in quick order.
I maintain that it would have been a much stronger book had the author decided to simply treat Henry’s condition as something ‘magical’ and inexplicable, rather than to try to make up a scientific explaination that raised more questions than it answered. Until she began her explainations, I was completely in the book - it was after that that things bothered me. [/spoiler]
Now, you can see my gripe as being a long-time SF reader’s reaction to the attitude that a lot of literary types take towards SF, in general: It’s not real literature, so it’s not as prestigious as more acceptable fictions. (Certainly it burned me to have read a few reviews of the book on Amazon that assured others that the book wasn’t really SF, so it could be read without giving up one’s subscription to the New York Review of Books.) If someone’s going to play in somebody else’s sandbox (And whatever you or I may think about the overall quality of the book, the premise of time travel, no matter how it is carried through, is an SF premise.) one has an obligation to take the time to see what the general rules are.
There’s no obligation to follow the rules, I’ll admit. But if one fails to follow the rules, it should be done in such a way as to make the story stronger. Not weaker. And not kick out long-time sandbox players out of the story. 