Hey! Feel like shattering someone else's dreams? Then critique my writing, please.

Jimmy: You’re a peach. Thanks for putting it into perspective. I do agree that reading something that’s just “I, I, I” could probably be a bit off-putting, but again, it’s a blog post. Still, I’ve asked for criticism, and that’s what I’ve been getting.

Cat Whisperer: Thank you very much. See, the thing about those blog posts is that they were a lot of fun to write. I was just curious if I actually had a bit of talent, or was just spinning my wheels. I’m glad you liked a couple of them.

Aswan/Chas: Thank you, as well. I will definitely look at your writing since you took the time to look at mine. I did read the article on how Modern Poetry sucks. I couldn’t agree more.