Sam, I hesitate to committ myself to a line by line refutation here, not being privy to piles of documents. But there are obvious elements of spin control here.
“…John Kerry’s four-month abbreviated tour…”
The advective “abbreviated” is necessary? Only if one is making a case that requires a bit of innuendo for seasoning. What a wealth of implication can be tucked into those words! Rather like the way the words “self-inflicted” are used to describe Kerry’s wounds, knowing full well the implication brings forth “shooting oneself in the foot to escape duty”. Of course, the record, as reflected herein, offers no such innuendo, but our correspondents see no need to let a perfectly good slur escape their grasp
“… A large majority of those who served with John Kerry in Swift boats in Vietnam and whose location is known have joined the organization…”
What a delightfully constructed innuendo! “Whose location is known…” to who? Are we given to understand that those persons who have not joined the group have disappeared from the face of the earth? Kidnapped by Hilary and JaneFonda, never to be seen or heard from again?
Or could it just be that it means “whose location is known” to the Swiftys? Whose location is known because they joined the Swiftys or had some contact with the Swiftys? Presumably, numbers would be available, such as “167 of the 169” or “10 of the 15”, but no, we are given, “a large majority”, the nature of “large” being at the discretion of its definers.
They also permit themselves considerable laxity in the “served with” category. They don’t define it at all. Does “served with” include boat mechanics at their main base? Does it include administrative personnel at a considerable remove? We are not told.
“…Thus, for example, sixteen of the twenty-three surviving officers who served in Coastal Division 11 with Kerry (the place where Kerry spent most of his time) have joined the organization…”
And seven did not. Why not? We are not told, it isn’t important, nothing to see here. But why not? And note again, implication without statement. They “served in Coastal Division 11 with Kerry”. Did they know Kerry? Were they intimately involved with the events under discussion? Well, they “served with Kerry”, we are to be satsified with that.
“…together with most of Kerry’s Vietnam commanders and 254 sailors from Coastal Squadron One, ranging from Vice-Admirals to Seamen…”
Isn’t this first group already mentioned? Being as they are, necessarily, officers? Are the Swifty lawyers mentioning the same group twice as though it were an addition, rather than a duplication?
And “254 sailors”? Out of how many? 255? A thousand? Ten thousand? A bit of perspective there would be enlightening, would it not? An enlightenment the Swifty lawyers omit, or do not possess in the first instance. Nothing strange about that, its a lawyerly work, only helpful evidence is offered.
“…The purpose of Swiftvets is to present the truth about John Kerry’s post-Vietnam charges of war crimes and John Kerry’s own Vietnam record. Swiftvets is uniquely positioned to do so since it includes most of the locatable sailors and officers who served with John Kerry in Vietnam…”
Interesting juxtaposition. From all the fooforaw about all this, one might well imagine that Mr. Kerry’s wartime conduct was the main thrust of the Swiftvets complaint, certainly it is the main focus of the attention they have so stridently demanded. But clearly, as regards Sen. Kerry’s testimony, etc., the Swiftvets are no more “uniquely positioned” than any other Viet Nam vet, no more “uniquely positioned” than such men as joined the Viet Nam Veterans Against the War. An appeal to expertise entirely unsupportable. And again, the adroit phrasing “…includes most…”. How many? Surely they know?
And what are we to make of the word “locatable”? By whom? By what means? They might mean “locatable” by stringent and rigorous effort, beating the bushes for every lead. Or it could just as easily mean “locatable” by means of sending in an application to join the Swiftvets
(As an aside, here’s what I suspect: that Sen. Kerry’s antiwar stance and testimony is the central issue, that the men drawn to this group were primarily motivated by their anger over those statements and actions of Sen. Kerry that they strongly disapprove. Entirely their right, of course. )
“Captain George Elliott, USN …Captain Adrian Lonsdale, USCG (retired)… Rear Admiral Roy Hoffmann…”
AS noted elsewhere, the testimony of these worthies is less than stellar. Mr. Elliott cannot seem to make up his mind, he states, he retracts, he restates. “…I have chosen to believe the other men. I absolutely do not know first hand…” I believe we can be forgiven if we dismiss further testimony from Mr. Elliott.
Adrian Lonsdale?
Again, a man of uncertain convictions, it would seem.
“…“He earned his medals, he did what he was supposed to do in Vietnam,” said retired Coast Guard Captain Adrian Lonsdale…”
(Aside: Coast Guard? Huh?)
So Sen. Kerry’s service is not the issue with Mr. Lonsdale, apparently, or at least not at the time of the interview referenced above. What is, then?
“…But I was very disappointed in his statements after he got out of the Navy. He is fit to be a great senator. But by his unfounded accusations about the atrocities, I was just very disappointed…”
It would seem, then, that Mr. Lonsdale has a bone to pick with Sen. Kerry. But he testifys that, in his opinion, Sen. Kerry did his duty and deserved his medals. Why then is he included as an accuser?
Because the Swiftvets have conflated the two! They have attracted veterans who are displeased with Sen. Kerry’s antiwar stance and testimony, and now pretend that the sheer numerical bulk of that group is somehow evidence, that it somehow relevent to Kerry’s service in the war.
By similar techniques of spin, we could present the surviving members of the Viet Nam Veterans Against the War (if they were “locatable”…I knew a lot of those guys, their record keeping talents were limited by a lack of enthusiasm…). We might imply that their expertise is relevent, when of course it is not.
It is known that many 'Nam vets detested Kerry for his antiwar stance. This is not in dispute. It is also known that many 'Nam vets supported Kerry’s position, and testimony, and continue to do so to this day. It would be interesting, perhaps, to have such numbers, but not very enlightening, since those are disagreements as to politics, and not to facts.
I tire. There is too much to plow through, perhaps another tag-team member can pick up. But I think I make my point: this is a very lawyerly piece of work, wherein the last drop of innuendo is squeezed, wherein “wholesale returns of conjecture are realized from a paltry investment of fact.”
We have lawyers here as well. The formidable Dewey, for instance (a rhetorical rapscallion enlisted by the Forces of Darkness for thier heinous ends) and the equally estimable Minty and Spavinged (palladins of truth and virtue, widely beloved and admired hereabouts)
One must be careful in one’s dealings with lawyerly attestations. They are not always entirely what they seem. It’s probably different in Canada. But that’s how it is here.