Journalism majors/students/etc....what's wrong with this story?

If it was a road rage incident, it would be unnecessary to mention the SUV or the driver in the lead. You’d probably write something like, “A man beat another man to death in what police are calling a road incident on Interstate 95 Sunday.” Later in the story you could add that the first man was driving an SUV.

Good one, Snooopy. That one ought to at least sell some papers! :wink:

Perhaps “struck” would have been a better word than “hit.”