# Lyric ideas that avoid cliches?

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/lyric-ideas-that-avoid-cliches/379978>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Created:** [November 11, 2006, 3:56am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/lyric-ideas-that-avoid-cliches/379978 "2006-11-11T03:56:17Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 2\
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**Author:** ![Roboto](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/b77776/32.png) [@Roboto](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Roboto)\
**Post date:** [November 11, 2006, 3:56am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/lyric-ideas-that-avoid-cliches/379978/1 "2006-11-11T03:56:17Z")

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I’m a songwriter in a lyrical slump, and thought perhaps I could get some ideas from bright doper minds!

I keep my songs abstract, as I’ve found that I can reach more people who will interperet the lyrics from their own perspective. I use as many metaphors as possible to keep the song interesting, and I try to avoid "I"s and "You"s as much as possible.

One idea I’ve considered yet haven’t implemented is inventing a fictional story as my subject . . . this may be a fun avenue for us to explore, especially since my life as a mortgage banker does not lend itself to interesting songs!!

Right now when I sit down, this is the cliche crap that I’m coming up with:

1. Sometimes I feel . . .
2. I feel lonely because . . .
3. I miss her because . . .

I invite you to challange my writer’s block with some fresh ideas.

Please note this is all in good fun . . . I know the board frown upon self promotion as an artist, etc. That’s not what I’m trying to do. I figured Cafe Society would be a good place for people to share, “I always thought a cool song could be about \_\_\_\_\_\_\_.” I in turn will share ideas with any of you that I have . . . I’m absolutely not concerned with copywrite, etc. I’m just a simple songwriter looking for ideas, and thought it might make an interesting thread. Thank you!

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**Author:** ![Plastic\_Soul](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/c4cdca/32.png) [@Plastic\_Soul](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Plastic_Soul)\
**Post date:** [November 11, 2006, 5:19am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/lyric-ideas-that-avoid-cliches/379978/2 "2006-11-11T05:19:52Z")

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Like dust in between  
the bristles of a broom  
i eagerly await  
to fly across the roooooo-oooom… 🙂
