Rocket Ship Galileo, Vol.10 of The Virginia Edition
The first of Heinlein’s run of juveniles started, per the introduction to this edition, as an offer in 1945 from Heyliger to write a boy’s novel about life 20 years from 1945. Heinlein liked the offer but didn’t accept, as he thought he could write more adult fare and try to influence the post-war management of atomic weapons and power. The introduction says the he told his friend, Fritz Lang (!!!) that the offer of a juvenile was being kept as a back up plan. Heinlein considered it “writing trivial entertainment for children.”
Well, look what made it to print. We know now that a huge part of Heinlein’s reputation would come on the series of juvenile novels he was to write during the 40s and 50s. But apparently the man, himself, didn’t. It was Lang who portrayed it as influencing the next generation (and, subsequently mine and I’d bet others). Heinlein determined to write children’s books in a different style than they’d normally been written.
Thus we get what I considered the most flawed of the juveniles, Rocket Ship Galileo. I’d always thought it a lesser work. The writing style seemed to me as a kid flat and sort of uninteresting, without the sort of larger human picture that the other juveniles had.
Could be the presence of an adult as a driving force. The three boys at the center of it, Morrie, Art and Ross as all fun guys, but it’s Dr Cargraves who drives the actions and makes the decisions. Also, there are laughable bits in the text that stand out. Several times a character needs an object and it’s presented in the flow as ‘So and so pulled out his X, which he’s gotten ten pages ago but wasn’t mentioned’. Very much a sort of ‘Flash Gordon brings out his never-before mentioned ULTRA-ray, which he packed for just such an occasion.’ Sure, Chekov’s gun is a bit of a trope, but there should be some warning that such items are in play instead of just magically appearing.
There’s also a bit of tech-manual to it. Frequently, paragraphs get taken up with how some things are being accomplished, which is fun. But it happens a lot in this one, as if Heinlein were trying to actually be an engineer on a shoestring moon project. It interrupts the flow of the story and, as I’ve argued before about his early writings, makes the story more about the gadget than the people using them.
Still, as the first of the juveniles it’s a win. Heyliger turned it down because the editor didn’t like the space flight angle. Still, after a bunch of rejections, Scribner’s, reported as the ‘most prestigious publishing house in America’ expressed interest. The title got changed from The Conquest of the Moon (even that was changed from the earlier The Young Atomic Engineers and The Secret Behind the Moon) to Rocket Ship Galileo and it hit the market in September 1947.
Plus, hey: Nazis! Who doesn’t like killing Nazis, right? Though they’re hardly presented as an actual threat in the book. Only two have speaking lines. One is a coward and one surrenders after being textbook Nazi-menace for a few pages.
Still, Nazis. Hard to go wrong, even now, decades later.
Read so far:
Vol 3: Starship Troopers
Vol 9: How to Be a Politician
Vol 10: Rocket Ship Galileo
Vol 11: Space Cadet
Vol 14: Between Planets
Vol 18: Tunnel in the Sky
Vol 20: Citizen of the Galaxy
Vol. 22: The Future History of Robert Heinlein Vol. 1
Vol 26: Job: A Comedy of Justice
Vol 32: Creating a Genre (short stories)
Vol 36: The Puppet Masters