Ooh, interesting!
Death of the Author spoilers
I actually liked the ending and felt that it retroactively made the rest of it make more sense to me. (I really disliked the robot chapters because they did not at all make sense to me to be a best-selling book, so once I didn’t have to hold that in my head anymore I liked it much better.) I actually thought the people made a fair amount of sense, they just didn’t behave in ways that I personally would behave, and I didn’t like them very much. Zelu in particular I thought behaved very consistently like someone that I would never ever be friends with because she would drive me absolutely insane.
Raven Scholar spoilers
I actually did like it! I thought it was very compelling. I thought it was also a mess both in terms of the characters (all of whom are supposed to be in their 30’s to 50s, but all of whom act like they’re in their 20s) and the plot was very entertaining and compelling but didn’t always make sense with the characters, to me.
Soooo… the thing about Everlasting is that I read a lot of fanfic. And everything that Everlasting did, I would say, is very very familiar to me from fanfic, to the point where I started to be like “oh, cool, it’s that trope showing up.” So to me it’s not really doing anything new, and I also struggle with thinking it should be recognized in awards, even though I had a ton of fun reading it (and if I’d seen it on AO3, would absolutely have unabashedly loved it).
But this book is by far the most polarizing one on the ballot in my experience, so I think there are a lot of people who disagree about it. I know people who absolutely adored it and people who absolutely hated it.