# Review my short story

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Created:** [August 15, 2005, 10:31pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162 "2005-08-15T22:31:46Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
**Page:** 2

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**Author:** ![Shalmanese](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/45deac/32.png) [@Shalmanese](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Shalmanese)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2005, 12:03am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162/21 "2005-08-18T00:03:26Z")

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Send it over to me at \<myusername\>@gmail.com

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**Author:** ![Shadez](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/90ced4/32.png) [@Shadez](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Shadez)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2005, 2:55am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162/22 "2005-08-18T02:55:14Z")

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Email me with it please. 😉

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**Author:** ![Shalmanese](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/45deac/32.png) [@Shalmanese](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Shalmanese)\
**Post date:** [August 19, 2005, 10:16am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162/23 "2005-08-19T10:16:47Z")

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I just sent you a review via email as my comments were a bit too copious to put here. Email me if you have any problems viewing it.

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**Author:** ![enigmatic](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/898d66/32.png) [@enigmatic](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/enigmatic)\
**Post date:** [August 19, 2005, 11:06am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/review-my-short-story/317162/24 "2005-08-19T11:06:00Z")

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Thanks for your feedback, I don’t have the time to do justice to the depth of your response right now, but I’ll try and email you with a more detailed response this evening.

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