Dear Dopers if there’s one place to go on the internet to find smart people knowledgable about grammar it’s here.
I have a job interview as a dvr sales rep for a certain company with the Death Star as it’s corporate logo this Monday. It’d be part time and bring in some much needed money, and be flexible around my classes. The only downside is giant 1 hour commute.
Anyway grammar isn’t my strong suite. I’ve read, revised, repeated, and Word seems happy with it, but could someone give it a look and let me know if I missed anything?
(spoiler so it isn’t eating up a bunch of screen, the gap at the top under the ‘name’ is where my contact information is, and the name was changed to protect the guilty.:p) (also warning it might appear a bit whorish because well at this point I am willing to whore my self quiet a bit for a job.)
[spoiler]Juan Quixote
Seeking experience in IT and customer service by providing informed recommendations and sales of AT&T U-verse products and services to meet customer needs.
Skills, Interests, and Education
Skills and experience related to U-verse products and services:
• Setup MediaPortal Server and Client on my LAN. MediaPortal Client and Server function just like U-verse Total Home DVR and Set Top Box. Any computer on my network that has a MediaPortal Client can connect to the MediaPortal Server and view the EPG, schedule recordings on the server box, or just watch TV and recordings. Just like the Total Home DVR and STB; TV and recordings are streamed from the server to clients.
The major differences are MediaPortal uses a PC installed TV turner to pickup over the air, or cable channels whereas Total Home DVR uses IPTV streaming of H.264 encoded channels over fiber, and VDSL connections. This makes U-verse technology more adaptable and not at the mercy of the weather. Also MediaPortal only works with PCs while Total Home uses dedicated TV boxes. Another difference is U-verse technology can be interactive since it’s over an IP network. Currently implemented interactive functions include: weather, games, and phone book.
General skills:
• Windows maintenance and administration including virus removal, troubleshooting, driver management, working with the registry, setting access rights, system internal maintenance, etc.
• Microsoft Word and Excel. (see attached samples for work done with these programs)
• Social Skills. I’m friendly, outgoing, and eager to please.
Interests include Science, History, Technology, Computers and Internet. Related to U-verse I’ve had a long time fascination with Digital Convergence; the process of computers, internet, TV, game consoles, phones, and the like evolving into a unified system with many faces
Education:
• Self-education in computers and an ongoing education at Glen Oaks Community College. I am pursuing dual certificates for Computer Information Systems and Computer Support Technician, and an Associate of Applied Science in Business Degree. Based on progress reports projected GPA at end of semester of 3.5+ (See included progress reports for Computer classes. Other classes can be furnished on request as well as transcript when final grades are posted )
• Strong self learner, scored in the 99th percentile for Science and Social Studies on the GED tests, 95th for Mathematics, and 86th percentile for reading. (see included transcript copy)
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Really hoping I get this. I got the interview at a school job fair thursday. I was just fishing for internship leads and started talking to the guy there. He said he didn’t have any, but we talked a few a bit about what he was looking for. Anyway they needed DVR sales reps so I made a good impression because I knew a bit about the product and done something similar as a hobby.
Tomorrow I plan to spend the day reading all about their products. I spent today making a really fancy spreadsheet for when I can work with drop down menus, and clock pie graphs that show when I don’t have class. More for a whizbang tech skills demo then practicality, but it is pretty practical too. Going to put in some homework samples I was proud of. My business flyer artwork and stuff.
I’m going to put the cover letter on the front of a blue folder, then put my resume on the left side and use a hole punch and those bendable metal paper fasteners to mount my included other papers on the right side. Then they can take them out to look at if they want.
He said they were looking for self motivated people.
Anyway thanks
I changed it to "on a LAN:. Rereading it reads a bit more professional that way

. It’s a devastating blow because I adore this job and this organization, and I don’t want to go anywhere - I had hoped to stay here until I retired, and I was on my way to an actual career here. The good news is that I know we are receiving good packages, my husband is employed, and we just rented (or are about to have the lease signed) our house in our previous state and will have the mortgage/bills paid, so we are okay money-wise for awhile.