# Song lyrics with poetic quality

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Tags:** music\
**Created:** [September 30, 2022, 11:09pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521 "2022-09-30T23:09:49Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![Al128](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/al128/32/16541_2.png) [@Al128](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Al128)\
**Post date:** [September 30, 2022, 11:09pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/1 "2022-09-30T23:09:49Z")

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pretty self explanatory…

- Hello Darkness my old friend, I come to talk to you again
- Words are falling out like endless rain into a paper cup

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**Author:** ![EinsteinsHund](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/einsteinshund/32/8400_2.png) [@EinsteinsHund](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/EinsteinsHund)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 12:13am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/2 "2022-10-01T00:13:09Z")

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One of the best. Pure poetry.

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/oecX_1pqxk0/maxresdefault.jpg "Bob Dylan - Mr. Tambourine Man (Official Audio)") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oecX_1pqxk0)

And this:

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/AwuCF5lYqEE/maxresdefault.jpg "Bob Dylan - Visions of Johanna (Official Audio)") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AwuCF5lYqEE)

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**Author:** ![Qadgop\_the\_Mercotan](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/qadgop_the_mercotan/32/83_2.png) [@Qadgop\_the\_Mercotan](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Qadgop_the_Mercotan)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 12:16am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/3 "2022-10-01T00:16:51Z")

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@EinsteinsHund dagnabbit, I came in here to post Dylan’s “Mr. Tambourine man”.

“Yes, to dance beneath the diamond sky  
With one hand waving free  
Silhouetted by the sea  
Circled by the circus sands  
With all memory and fate  
Driven deep beneath the waves  
Let me forget about today until tomorrow”

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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 12:17am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/4 "2022-10-01T00:17:07Z")

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You can have your gold and your diamonds too.  
All I want is a ring dang doo.

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**Author:** ![bobot](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/bobot/32/21622_2.png) [@bobot](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/bobot)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 12:28am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/5 "2022-10-01T00:28:29Z")

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[![](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/JBNWkCsmqAY/hqdefault.jpg "Bob Dylan - It's Alright, Ma (I'm Only Bleeding) - With Lyrics") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JBNWkCsmqAY)

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**Author:** ![duality72](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/duality72/32/3910_2.png) [@duality72](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/duality72)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 1:35am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/6 "2022-10-01T01:35:13Z")

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[A Pillow of Winds by Waters and Gilmour](https://youtu.be/ZiJX0bkkcv4)

A cloud of eiderdown draws around me, softening the sound  
Sleepy time when I lie with my love by my side, and she’s breathing low  
And the candle dies

When night comes down, you lock the door, the book falls to the floor  
As darkness falls and waves roll by, the seasons change, the wind is warm  
Now wakes the owl, now sleeps the swan, behold a dream, the dream is gone  
Green fields, a cold rain is falling in a golden dawn

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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 4:45am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/7 "2022-10-01T04:45:30Z")

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Helplessly hoping her harlequin hovers nearby  
Awaiting a word  
Gasping at glimpses of gentle true spirit, he runs  
Wishing he could fly  
Only to trip at the sound of goodbye

\<removed excess lines, WE?\>

[![](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/WGtFRsCXRcc/hqdefault.jpg "Crosby, Stills & Nash - Helplessly Hoping (With Lyrics)") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGtFRsCXRcc)

Crosby, Still and Nash - Helplessly Hoping

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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 9:48am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/8 "2022-10-01T09:48:35Z")

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Nothing Rhymed  
Song by Gilbert O’Sullivan

> When I’m drinking my Bonaparte Shandy  
> Eating more than enough apple pies  
> Will I glance at my screen  
> And see real human beings  
> Starve to death right in front of my eyes
> 
> Nothing old, nothing new, nothing ventured  
> Nothing gained, nothing still-born or lost  
> Nothing further than proof, nothing wilder than youth  
> Nothing older than time, nothing sweeter than wine  
> Nothing physically recklessly, hopelessly blind  
> Nothing I couldn’t say  
> Nothing why 'cos today  
> Nothing rhymed

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**Author:** ![Mean\_Mr.Mustard](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/mean_mr.mustard/32/3865_2.png) [@Mean\_Mr.Mustard](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Mean_Mr.Mustard)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 12:07pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/9 "2022-10-01T12:07:53Z")

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In her Leonard Cohen biography “I’m Your Man: The Life of Leonard Cohen”, author Sylvie Simmons makes the distinction between poetry and song lyrics. Simmons states that writers of lyrics are writing words that fit the song, while poets are writing _poems_ (or something like that, I’m paraphrasing).

Anyway, Cohen was a poet before he became interested in music, and it shows.

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_Ring the bells that still can ring_  
_Forget your perfect offering_  
_There is a crack, a crack in everything_  
_That’s how the light gets in_

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_And I choose the rooms that I live in with care_  
_The windows are small and the walls almost bare_  
_There’s only one bed and there’s only one prayer_  
_I listen all night for your step on the stair_

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_We met when we were almost young_  
_Deep in the green lilac park_  
_You held on to me like I was a crucifix_  
_As we went kneeling through the dark_

* * *

mmm

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**Author:** ![Al128](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/al128/32/16541_2.png) [@Al128](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Al128)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 2:28pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/10 "2022-10-01T14:28:55Z")

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On a morning from a Bogart movie  
in a country where they turn back time  
you go strolling through the crowd like peter lorre  
contemplating a crime  
she comes out of the sun in a silk dress running  
like a watercolour in the rain  
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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 2:42pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/12 "2022-10-01T14:42:35Z")

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To everyone, be careful quoting more than a small amount of Copyrighted material. Several in this thread appear to exceed fair use and the quote post is far over.

I will remove some excess lines.

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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 3:44pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/14 "2022-10-01T15:44:18Z")

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Does John Cooper Clarke count? Is it cheating because it started out as poetry?

[Beasley Street](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37QUUwp9xIs)

> Hot beneath the collar  
> An inspector calls  
> Where the perishing stink of squalor  
> Impregnates the walls  
> The rats have all got rickets  
> They spit through broken teeth  
> The name of the game is not cricket  
> Caught out on Beasley Street

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**Post date:** [October 1, 2022, 11:55pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/15 "2022-10-01T23:55:30Z")

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Yes, my guard stood hard when abstract threats  
Too noble to neglect  
Deceived me into thinking  
I had something to protect  
Good and bad, I define these terms  
Quite clear, no doubt, somehow  
Ah, but I was so much older then  
I’m younger than that now

Why don’t we just give 94.2% of Dylan’s stuff an automatic bye in.

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**Author:** ![DrDeth](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/b487fb/32.png) [@DrDeth](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/DrDeth)\
**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 12:03am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/16 "2022-10-02T00:03:01Z")

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The Byrds:  
_To everything (turn, turn, turn)_  
_There is a season (turn, turn, turn)_  
_And a time to every purpose, under heaven_

_A time to be born, a time to die_  
_A time to plant, a time to reap_  
_A time to kill, a time to heal_  
_A time to laugh, a time to weep_

_To everything (turn, turn, turn)_  
_There is a season (turn, turn, turn)_  
_And a time to every purpose, under heaven_

_A time to build up, a time to break down_  
_A time to dance, a time to mourn_  
_A time to cast away stones, a time to gather stones together_

_To everything (turn, turn, turn)_  
_There is a season (turn, turn, turn)_  
_And a time to every purpose, under heaven_

_A time of love, a time of hate_  
_A time of war, a time of peace_  
_A time you may embrace, a time to refrain from embracing_

_To everything (turn, turn, turn)_  
_There is a season (turn, turn, turn)_  
_And a time to every purpose, under heaven_

_A time to gain, a time to lose_  
_A time to rend, a time to sew_…

I quote the song nearly in full as it is from the first eight verses of the third chapter of the Book of Ecclesiastes. The exception being the “turn turn turn” which is fair use, and the last two lines which I did not post)

Which I believe has fallen out of copyright… 😛

- “[Turn! Turn! Turn!](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turn!_Turn!_Turn!) (To Everything There Is a Season)”, a song written by [Pete Seeger](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pete_Seeger) in the late 1950s, which the [Byrds](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Byrds) scored a 1965 hit with. The lyrics, except for the title which is repeated throughout the song and the final two lines, are adapted word-for-word from the English [King James Version](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/King_James_Version) of [Ecclesiastes 3:1-8](https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Bible_(King_James)/Ecclesiastes#3:1).[[25]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ecclesiastes_3#cite_note-26) The song became an international hit in late 1965 when it was covered by the American folk rock band [The Byrds](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Byrds).[[26]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ecclesiastes_3#cite_note-allmusic-27) In the U.S., the song holds distinction as the #1 hit with the oldest lyrics, and also with the oldest lyric writer, King [Solomon](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solomon) of [Israel](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Israel).[[27]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ecclesiastes_3#cite_note-28)\*

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**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 4:08am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/17 "2022-10-02T04:08:33Z")

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[![](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/cqZc7ZQURMs/hqdefault.jpg?sqp=-oaymwEmCOADEOgC8quKqQMa8AEB-AH-BIAC4AOKAgwIABABGBEgWihyMA8=&rs=AOn4CLBa3Nd73dh8dM-6sDpyRl3cyPvv9Q "Al Stewart - Year Of The Cat") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cqZc7ZQURMs)

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/XkYexMQ1BRI/maxresdefault.jpg "Sand In Your Shoes") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkYexMQ1BRI)

https://www.youtube.com/embed/zSPkQDKXfjc?feature=oembed&wmode=opaque&list=PLzEG2f9QAl8Oq2k0TQ96E3rNhIkdtQkek

https://www.youtube.com/embed/6tDnSiAL7Fg?feature=oembed&wmode=opaque&list=PLzEG2f9QAl8Oq2k0TQ96E3rNhIkdtQkek

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**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 4:49am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/18 "2022-10-02T04:49:46Z")

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Guy Clark isn’t so well known, but he had a poet’s soul:

**Dublin Blues**  
_So forgive me all my anger_  
_Forgive me all my faults_  
_There’s no need to forgive me_  
_For thinkin’ what I thought_  
_I loved you from the get go_  
_And I’ll love you till I die_  
_I loved you on the Spanish Steps_  
_The day you said goodbye_

**The Randall Knife**  
_My father had a Randall knife_  
_My mother gave it to him_  
_When he went off to WWII_  
_To save us all from ruin_  
_If you’ve ever held a Randall knife_  
_Then you know my father well_  
_If a better blade was ever made_  
_It was probably forged in hell_

_My father was a good man_  
_A lawyer by his trade_  
_And only once did I ever see_  
_Him misuse the blade_  
_It almost cut his thumb off_  
_When he took it for a tool_  
_The knife was made for darker things_  
_And you could not bend the rules_

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**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 4:36pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/19 "2022-10-02T16:36:07Z")

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A couple of observations from the late folk artist Bill Morrissey:

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The house burnt down on a rainy night, and I never did find out why.  
I just stood alone ‘neath the silver maple, trying to keep my cigarettes dry.  
Waiting for the fireman I couldn’t save a thing,  
and deep within my home above the roar of the flames,  
I thought I heard my telephone ring…

[_Man From Out of Town_](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhmw9JFHVtY)

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I park my cab on Water Street,  
I’m waiting for a fare.  
Watching young girls in their first heels  
step like colts across the square.

[_Handsome Molly_](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqwK9eJz_yQ&list=OLAK5uy_mmgh2THCRYMn1C0zsQ7CC2kd4n3-Qa9H0&index=3)  
(Traditional, but still poetic)

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**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 6:30pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/20 "2022-10-02T18:30:06Z")

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> [@DrDeth](#):
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> The Byrds:  
> _To everything (turn, turn, turn)_

That is one of the most beautiful songs ever recorded.

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**Author:** ![EinsteinsHund](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/einsteinshund/32/8400_2.png) [@EinsteinsHund](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/EinsteinsHund)\
**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 6:40pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/21 "2022-10-02T18:40:21Z")

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> [@DrDeth](#):
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> I quote the song nearly in full as it is from the first eight verses of the third chapter of the Book of Ecclesiastes. The exception being the “turn turn turn” which is fair use, and the last two lines which I did not post)

Yeah, the words “A time for peace, I swear it’s not too late” were added by the Byrds.

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**Post date:** [October 2, 2022, 6:40pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/song-lyrics-with-poetic-quality/972521/22 "2022-10-02T18:40:33Z")

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_Confusion will be my epitaph_  
_As I crawl a cracked and broken path_  
_If we make it, we can all sit back and laugh_  
_But I fear tomorrow I’ll be crying_

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