# The best closing lines/stanzas in songs

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**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Tags:** music\
**Created:** [February 4, 2022, 12:26am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-best-closing-lines-stanzas-in-songs/958878 "2022-02-04T00:26:23Z")\
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Mose Allison’s Parchman’s Farm has the most powerful ending line in music. The song sets you up to think of the poor man is suffering in prison with the line “And I ain’t never done no man no harm.”

Then you get to the final verse.

[![]( " - YouTube") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RCpbWLjlrdU)

It’s best to listen to it for the full effect. But here are the lyrics if you want the short version.

Well I’m gonna be here for the rest of my life  
I’m gonna be on this farm for my natural life  
Well I’m a gonna be here for the rest of my life  
And all I did was shoot my wife

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_In the end, Swamper and Greeny_  
_Finally succumbed to the ways of Harold,_  
_And in doing so, each gave_  
_Just a little bit of their soul away._

_What a couple of dumbshits._

-Primus

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This is from Fairport Convention’s “Matty Groves”, their version of a 1700s folk ballad. They sing it a bit too fast for the words to have the full effect. Lord Donald surprises his wife in bed with young Matty:

Lord Donald struck the very next blow and Matty struck no more  
And then Lord Donald took his wife and he sat her on his knee  
Saying “Who do you like the best of us, Matty Groves or me?”  
And then up spoke his own dear wife, never heard to speak so free  
“I’d rather a kiss from dead Matty’s lips than you or your finery”

Lord Donald he jumped up and loudly he did bawl  
He struck his wife right through the heart and pinned her against the wall  
"A grave, a grave, " Lord Donald cried, “to put these lovers in  
But bury my lady at the top for she was of noble kin”

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You know she came to see him one last time  
Oh, and we all wondered if she would  
And it kept runnin’ through my mind  
This time - he’s over her for good

He stopped loving her today  
They placed a wreath upon his door  
And soon they’ll carry him away  
He stopped loving her today

– George Jones

Written by Bobby Braddock and Curly Putman

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The last verse of, _Green, Green Grass of Home_, sets the whole song on its ear. In a good way. Did he kill Mary?

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> [@lobotomyboy63](#):
>
> And the three men I admire most  
> The father, son, and the Holy Ghost  
> They caught the last train for the coast  
> The day, the music died.
> 
> (To refrain)

If we can so relegate this or that bit as a parenthetical, then: _I know what I am, and I’m glad I’m a man, and so is Lola._

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**Post date:** [February 5, 2022, 10:13pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-best-closing-lines-stanzas-in-songs/958878/47 "2022-02-05T22:13:15Z")

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> They would not listen, they’re not listening still,  
> Perhaps they never will.

Don McLean, “Vincent”

> Cradled by two loving arms that I’ll die for,  
> One little kiss, and Felina, goodbye.

Marty Robbins, “El Paso”.

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**Post date:** [February 5, 2022, 10:26pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-best-closing-lines-stanzas-in-songs/958878/48 "2022-02-05T22:26:29Z")

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> [@solost](#):
>
> Maybe not the ‘best’ closing stanza but a nice dark twist, I always thought-- The first 3 verses of The Doors’ “Moonlight Drive” sounds like a fairly conventional love song, then Jim hits you with the outro:

I guess that one’s part of the disturbing subgenre of songs about guys killing their girlfriends down by the river, along with Sugar’s “A Good Idea” and Nick Cave’s “Where The Wild Roses Grow.”

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> [@veryfrank](#):
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> I guess that one’s part of the disturbing subgenre of songs about guys killing their girlfriends down by the river, along with Sugar’s “A Good Idea” and Nick Cave’s “Where The Wild Roses Grow.”

Yeah, that’s an age old genre of American and British folk. My favorite is “Knoxville Girl”, here are my two favorite versions, by the Louvin Brothers and the Lemonheads:

[![](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/KhMiKeSffns/hqdefault.jpg "Knoxville Girl - The Louvin Brothers") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KhMiKeSffns)

[![](https://i.ytimg.com/vi/10XFxu9Vdmo/hqdefault.jpg "The Lemonheads -Knoxville Girl") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=10XFxu9Vdmo)

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The murder ballad! Alive and well of late.

Kate McCannon by Colter Wall

Closing lines  
_So I made for the creek_  
_Where she and I did meet_  
_And found her with some other lover_

_And I put three rounds into Kate McCannon_

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/hCebq5lLgos/maxresdefault.jpg "Original 16 Brewery Sessions - Colter Wall - "Kate McCannon"") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hCebq5lLgos)

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_You can run on for a long time  
Run on for a long time  
Run on for a long time  
Sooner or later God’ll cut you down  
Sooner or later God’ll cut you down_

The Johnny Cash version is probably most well known, but I believe Elvis did it as well.

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> [@veryfrank](#):
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> I guess that one’s part of the disturbing subgenre of songs about guys killing their girlfriends down by the river, along with Sugar’s “A Good Idea” and Nick Cave’s “Where The Wild Roses Grow.”

Not to mention:

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/KflCXmEX6BY/maxresdefault.jpg "Down by the River (2009 Remaster)") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KflCXmEX6BY)

Or:

[![](https://img.youtube.com/vi/0JWJbUrBmtM/maxresdefault.jpg "J.J Cale - The River Runs Deep (studio version)") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JWJbUrBmtM)

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But the song ends too soon for us all.  
— Jethro Tull (Ian Anderson), “Life is a Long Song”

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And me, I spend a lot of time pickin’ flowers up on Choctaw Ridge  
And drop them into the muddy water off the Tallahatchie Bridge

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Attention all Planets of the Solar Federation  
Attention all Planets of the Solar Federation  
Attention all Planets of the Solar Federation  
We have assumed control  
We have assumed control  
We have assumed control  
_=_=_=_======_=_=_=_=\*  
Neil Peart of Rush {RIP, Professor} wrote MANY great lyrical lines in his career but the dramatic closing lines of “2112” still electrify me!

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_Look my eyes are just holograms_  
_Look your love has drawn red from my hands_  
_From my hands you know you’ll never be_  
_More than twist in my sobriety_  
_More than twist in my sobriety_  
_Look my eyes are just holograms_

_Look your love has drawn red from my hands_  
_From my hands you know you’ll never be_  
_More than twist in my sobriety_  
_More than twist in my sobriety_  
_More than twist in my sobriety_

—_ **Twist in My Sobriety** _, Tanita Tikaram

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> [@](#):
>
> Sometimes I don’t thrill you  
> Sometimes I think I’ll kill you  
> Just don’t let me fuck up, will you  
> Because when I need a friend it’s still you
> 
> What a mess

-_Freak Scene_, Dinosaur Jr.

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Iron Maiden, “The Trooper”;

_We get so close, near enough to fight_  
_When a Russian gets me in his sights_  
_He pulls the trigger and I feel the blow_  
_A burst of rounds take my horse below_  
_And as I lay there gazing at the sky_  
_My body’s numb and my throat is dry_  
_And as I lay forgotten and alone_  
_Without a tear, I draw my parting groan_

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Warren Zevon, **Roland the Headless Thompson Gunner**

_Patty Hearst  
Heard the burst  
Of Roland’s Thompson gun  
And bought it_

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Simon and Garfunkel, _Poem on an Underground Wall_:

And his heart is laughing, screaming, pounding,  
The poem across the tracks rebounding.  
Shadowed by the exit light,  
His legs take their ascending flight  
To seek the breast of darkness  
And be suckled by the night.

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