So I’ve finally completed reading the book, and on the whole, I thought it was very well argued and painted a much more nuanced picture of the emergence of various kinds of social structures than is usually available in the popular literature, so it was definitely well worth a read. But I felt that it made a bit of a leap at a key point in the argument that I’m not sure was as well supported as it needs to be (or maybe I just missed something). Namely, the idea seems to be that the observed variance from the sort of ‘invent agriculture, become a hierarchical nation-state like construct’ implies conscious, deliberate choosing of social orders, which is something we today seem to have ‘lost’, having become locked into a kind of structure (that of the hierarchical nation-state) that we thus consider ‘inevitable’. But I’m not sure that this inference is actually supported by the evidence Graeber and Wengrow supply (or at least by how I understood their portrayal of the evidence).
First of all, I fully accept the facts of their account, at least for the purpose of discussion. Humans generally didn’t just settle down into hierarchical structures after the introduction of agriculture, didn’t just ‘rush to their chains’ after a period of ‘primitive communism’. But I’m not sure how much deliberation that implies. Not that I’m claiming that ‘primitive people’ weren’t capable of such deliberations—I think they were, just as much as we’re now. I’m just not sure that social structures really generally are the result of such deliberations, whether now or in ancient times; I tend to view them more through a statistical lens, as something more akin to phase transitions than as ‘engineered’, purposeful, goal-directed developments. (I’m not sure I’m right about this, but I think that this is missing as an option in the book.)
The fact that there doesn’t seem to be a ‘simple’ transition from hunter-gatherer to agricultural society doesn’t in itself contradict this idea: even simple phase transitions, such as freezing water, generally involve quite a bit of back and forth on the small scale, so a ‘traditional’ narrative of water just getting more and more solid upon temperature dropping could well be contradicted by a narrative of regions of water congealing and breaking up again, in something like a cyclical fashion with more complexity than the ‘traditional’ narrative allows for. But this doesn’t imply any conscious choice on the part of the water regarding whether to band together into ice or not; nor does it imply that water at -20°C, all else being equal, still has a choice regarding whether to be solid or not.
I think the main line of argument for the efficacy of conscious deliberation is the indigenous criticism of Western European society. But first of all, such criticism doesn’t necessarily entail anything about conscious choice—many people are critical of today’s society while being part of it, so this criticism might come from a society that differs from ours only through historical accident, rather than the interior critical forces. Furthermore, criticism of another society seems, to me, often to be a function of, rather than a constitutive element to, the society one belongs to: what’s familiar is often conflated for what’s better. The city I live in has an intense rivalry with a neighboring one, and each heavily criticized the other’s traditions and customs (if mostly in a playful manner)—but I don’t think that the customs of either city developed in a conscious effort to improve upon the other’s (perhaps, by way of ‘schismogenesis’, to differentiate itself from the other, but that’s not a solid basis for reasoned criticism, either). (Playing a game of ‘why are you doing it that way’, so to speak.)
Lastly, there’s an argument that, given the chance, people often choose to remain in or return to traditional societies, no matter whether they’re native to them or not. But I’m not sure if this argument is as persuasive as it seems, either. People often choose to join cults or sects, and it can be hard or impossible to persuade them to leave; that on its own doesn’t mean that being part of such a cult is a superior way to live. (That’s of course not to say that such a lifestyle might not be infinitely more fulfilling—I wouldn’t know, I’ve never tried it—but merely that the fact that people choose it doesn’t imply that it is. People don’t always make great choices on that front, which, after all, must be what got us into this mess, if social change is a question of deliberation.)