If only this hadn’t been pointed out in the OP, you might get a pat on the back or a scolding; as it is, a clever critique from a Republican equals repeating what a Democrat has already said. 
Again, I think Gingrich did something brilliant in 1994. I fault him for many things, but not for lack of vision or for organizational knowhow. And I think that very few people would care about the Democrats’ copying his format. Sure, bitter Republicans would cavil about it, but they like to cavil; let them cavil, it’ll keep them occupied. Remember how pissed they got about “Clinton’s just copying us!” back in 1996? Nobody but them gave a shit.
Now, for your substantive comments:
Requiring documentation of contacts between lobbyists and legislators is a bureaucratic nightmare? Tough cookies: do it anyway. If it discourages lobbyists, well, I hardly think that’s going to be a hard sell for Democrats.
I agree that the “clean elections” business is vague; I don’t know what he means by it, either.
Totally untrue. The proposals there are:
Improve port security, bolster first responders and public health capacity, and require adequate defense planning by high-risk chemical plants. End the pork-barrel squandering of security funds.
If Republicans want to characterize this as “Stick it to the Bush Administration,” again, that’ll be to the Democrats’ benefit. These are all going to be extremely popular measures, if specifics are suggested. The last one will be hardest to give specifics for, but if it’s done, this is a real winner of an issue–especially if Republicans start getting defensive about it. I agree that the parts about Bush should be stripped from it: don’t mention the opponent.
It’s not specific, but there’s potential for specificity here. I definitely think that an energy policy that emphasizes clean fuels and energy independence would be a winner for the Democrats. People really like environmentalism. It’s sexy.
Not if there are specifics: if they say, for example (and I’m making numbers up for the sake of the example), “We will return the corporate income tax level to those levels approved by Congress in 1996,” they’ve got something specific, and they get to twist the knife a little. I’m not convinced that using the revenues to rebuild Katrina is the best approach: we’ll need to see how the Gulf Coast is doing in half a year.
Agreed.
And to the families of minimum wage workers, and to many people who are sympathetic to minimum wage workers. Folks who take an economic aversion to minimum wage are very rare:
Another big winner for Democrats, and should definitely be in there.
Reluctantly agreed. I think it’s a fine proposal, but this is one of the places I’m willing to compromise.
Agreed, although if there were specific proposals included, I might re-evaluate. As I said earlier, I’d support, and I believe it’d be very popular (especially in a red state like North Carolina), a proposal linking free-trade agreements to human-rights and environmental improvements in the partner country.
I have no idea whether the first part would be doable. I think a more reasonable goal would be universal health care for all minors by 2015; I suspect that most people would agree that it’s awful for children to go without necessary medical care, and that rectifying this situation would be a superb use of taxpayer money.
Skipping a few for which I don’t have much to say:
You’re dead wrong on this one. When a specific and inflexible timetable was floated in a June Gallup poll, people were dead-split on whether it was a good idea. When folks were asked whether most of the troops ought to be brought home “in the next year,” people broke almost two to one in favor of the idea.
And what’s contradictory about the rest?
Daniel