# The Poetry Thread

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746>\
**Category:** Cafe Society\
**Created:** [September 20, 2002, 6:30am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746 "2002-09-20T06:30:48Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 13\
**Page:** 2

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**Author:** ![papergirl](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/aca169/32.png) [@papergirl](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/papergirl)\
**Post date:** [November 26, 2002, 3:04am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/21 "2002-11-26T03:04:35Z")

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May I? Thanks!

Poem for a Fourteen Year Old Son

That evening, you found your parakeet dead  
in the corner of his cage, and the force of your grief  
drove you against me, clutching and mute.  
I held you and said the motherwords that are natural  
after fourteen years, and hid that small secret  
gladness—the joy I couldn’t help at this unexpected chance,  
perhaps the last time you would come to me for comfort.  
A month from now, a year, you would begin to hide  
your bruises and sorrows. You would say it’s fine  
when your gerbil died, and lock yourself in your room  
when your girlfriend moved away, and I  
would begin the unending process of letting go.  
There in your bright bedroom I cried with you,  
grieving my own losses, safekeeping each moment  
and offering unvoiced thanks to poor Crackers  
silent behind his thin chrome bars, huddled  
beautiful and calm in his yellows and greens.

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**Author:** ![Fatwater\_Fewl](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/4491bb/32.png) [@Fatwater\_Fewl](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Fatwater_Fewl)\
**Post date:** [November 28, 2002, 4:52pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/22 "2002-11-28T16:52:14Z")

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bump

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**Author:** ![Triskadecamus](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/b19c9b/32.png) [@Triskadecamus](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Triskadecamus)\
**Post date:** [November 28, 2002, 7:35pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/23 "2002-11-28T19:35:19Z")

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So little time left,  
And yet she does not know it.  
She is beautiful.

Still a child, for a while,  
Yet soon to be a woman.

Goodbye sweet baby!  
I cannot hold you back now.  
These are a fool’s tears.

But if your own tears return,  
I will be waiting for you.

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**Author:** ![Ludovic](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/7ab992/32.png) [@Ludovic](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Ludovic)\
**Post date:** [November 29, 2002, 7:19pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/24 "2002-11-29T19:19:10Z")

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Welcome to Disney World,  
hope you have fun.  
Now give us all your money  
and your firstborn son.

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**Author:** ![AncientHumanoid](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/ancienthumanoid/32/278_2.png) [@AncientHumanoid](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/AncientHumanoid)\
**Post date:** [November 30, 2002, 12:12am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/25 "2002-11-30T00:12:57Z")

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**Adam’s Lament**

I take the apple given me  
And procede to take a bite  
I had to do something with it  
It was given me by my wife  
That rib that became a woman  
Has caused a lot of pain  
I can’t say having a compliment  
Is really such a gain  
You can’t take her fishing  
She thinks that worms are icky  
But she’ll stick her tongue on mine  
And lick warm and sticky  
Her voice is different  
Smooth and high  
Sometimes for no reason  
She just starts to cry  
Her shape is different, too  
(I must admit, _that_ I like)  
But I wish instead of _Woman_  
God had brought to me a bike!  
Or a boat  
Or some shoes  
Or a rotton fig  
Or splinters under my tongue  
Or shards of glass in my feet  
Or…

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**Author:** ![AncientHumanoid](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/straightdope/user_avatar/boards.straightdope.com/ancienthumanoid/32/278_2.png) [@AncientHumanoid](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/AncientHumanoid)\
**Post date:** [November 30, 2002, 12:23am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/26 "2002-11-30T00:23:41Z")

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**The Danaan**

Sitting silently in a tree  
I strive to listen closely  
Remembering how things used to be  
When a place like this was holy  
And people walked the astral plane  
As far as they could go  
Enduring vast amounts of pain  
With lust their eyes did glow  
Creeping darkly on the ground  
I catch an earthly scent  
I flay it madly round and round  
For fear my life is spent  
Then I remember who I am  
The things that I must do  
For I am living as mortal man  
And only this tree is true

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**Author:** ![Anubis](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/dfb087/32.png) [@Anubis](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Anubis)\
**Post date:** [November 30, 2002, 1:15am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/27 "2002-11-30T01:15:37Z")

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[My site with 8 of my poems on it](http://www.geocities.com/danames42/index.html)  
(Hey, its on Geocities. Whaddya expect? Quality? Ha!)

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**Author:** ![Siege](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/dbc845/32.png) [@Siege](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Siege)\
**Post date:** [December 18, 2002, 4:01pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/28 "2002-12-18T16:01:04Z")

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**Middle Age**

Middle Age

I have lost the words.

In voyaging, in scrabbling,  
In years of endless night,  
In struggling, in scavenging,  
I have misplaced the light.  
Fear has drained its power,  
But moreso life itself,  
For job and rent and bills to play  
Replaced it on the shelf.

I have misplaced my skill.

A silly thing, a faerie’s wing!  
What good does it do me?  
It does not toil; it does not spin.  
It’s just a fantasy.  
I must see things as they are,  
Not waste my time in play!  
It’s what I do that shows my worth,  
Not what I have to say.

I am afraid to try.

Though I open heart and open soul  
To show you all I dream,  
My words will fade in empty air  
As I neglect my theme.  
And no one hears it anyway.  
It’s not what matters now.  
And if they did, they’d only ask,  
And I cannot answer, “How?”

I am too old to dream.

A prodigy now past her time,  
It’s not what women do.  
Silly girls play games with rhyme.  
Give dignity its due.  
It’s easy now to walk in shade,  
Put childish things away,  
To hide the gifts I one time prized,  
Or say now, “Not today.”

If I step into the light,  
Give words a living form,  
Can I withstand the fire’s touch?  
Will it burn or merely warm?  
I remember words inflamed my soul,  
Flowing faster than my pen!  
Form and shape and flashing rhyme!  
I want them once again!  
And if this is a faerie’s wing,  
Well faeries still can fly.  
I think it’s time I claim my place;  
I think it’s time I try.

C. J. Howorth  
12/17, finished 12/18, 10:38 am

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**Author:** ![unwashed\_brain](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/a9adbd/32.png) [@unwashed\_brain](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/unwashed_brain)\
**Post date:** [December 18, 2002, 6:45pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/29 "2002-12-18T18:45:28Z")

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I paid attention all I had  
so now there’s nothing left  
to pay old Charon’s fare  
back across the river Styx  
so I’ll just sit on the shore  
testing the molten river’s mettle  
tossing shards of what surely  
must be the bones of  
some poor soul like my own

poor Cerberus he had  
such a bad reputation  
he just wanted someone to  
scratch behind all six  
of his all-hearing ears  
and Medusa’s stoney gaze  
and nest of serpents in her hair  
sort of hid the fact that  
she’s as repulsed as we are

feet in knee in thigh in waist in  
chest in head in I begin to swim  
across the water dyed red  
and glowing from the spotlights  
at the bottom of this manmade canal  
it’s a myth you see  
proven with belief  
it’s a myth you see  
you must surely see

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**Author:** ![unwashed\_brain](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/a9adbd/32.png) [@unwashed\_brain](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/unwashed_brain)\
**Post date:** [December 18, 2002, 6:47pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/30 "2002-12-18T18:47:47Z")

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what has become…of me  
the silence is glassed and glazed thick like the spit in my mouth  
and I sweat out the only available moisture  
so dry  
this desert in my mind  
give in  
let go  
turn back  
no relapse for an hour at least  
what thought rules that desperate look in the hollow eyes of the blinded  
seek the light  
get it right  
no patience for the ignorance of innocence  
tread upon the trampled flesh of the helpless  
help yourself  
inside the temple where gods feast on the souls of the dead  
from ambrosia to cynosure  
a parasitic illusion of allusions  
volatile with threats of veracity  
get out  
while volition remains an option  
crawl away under the dust  
and remain a part of me  
as if part of me remains unshed  
my shell is dry  
peel it back  
as the old gives in to the new  
as the excoriation begins  
each syllable a drop of acid  
each drop a stagnant regret  
each regret an affirmation  
of what…has become of me

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**Author:** ![Fatwater\_Fewl](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/4491bb/32.png) [@Fatwater\_Fewl](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Fatwater_Fewl)\
**Post date:** [December 18, 2002, 7:53pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/31 "2002-12-18T19:53:39Z")

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**A Hand (Mindful)**

So the indecisive frosts of December have come  
And you have been walking under bare trees  
Through the fallen, wet leaves  
To this; a summons of the body  
To an unset scene.

Here is a hand, mindful of want, caught in the meter of memory.  
Here is the tongue that hitches mind to language,  
Language to the sun rising in every cell.  
Here is the eye that breaks light free of prisms  
And scatters it into candled flesh;  
A burning scented with night, distance and mourning.

This is a summons of the body of need.  
This is the onset. _Scene_:  
This is a mind, a handful of memory  
Caught in the meter of days.

This is a tongue that hitches and stutters,  
Its language like a sun assaulted by clouds.  
Here you are, an eye that prisms all light to memory,  
A distant burning – This is a summons of the body.  
Here is what may be seen:

A hand which neither lights nor extinguishes nothing –  
Not the sun, not the eye, not memory, not burning,  
But a hand which opens beyond language,  
A hand which opens through distance,  
Beyond the fallen, wet leaves to a tree;  
Its limbs like a tangle of bare wires twisting dangerously. [Live.]  
John MacKenzie  
December, 2002

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**Author:** ![Ribo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/e274bd/32.png) [@Ribo](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Ribo)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2004, 4:54am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/32 "2004-04-26T04:54:58Z")

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## When watches change:

All that matters  
Is all that will remain.

when watches change,  
you’re a boy crying.

you can change the day,  
but you’ll never find the day you died.

The point is i’ve quit smoking,  
and then take another,  
when the watches change.

The day will come,  
when all that matters  
is all there is.

## 2 across

Bad news casts no shadow, good news beats a drum.  
thin hair and cigarettes.  
Salery men see the truth from a moving train.  
Brace yourself to scream with all you’ve got… ready? Ready?  
Oh, sorry,  
“Hello?”

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**Author:** ![Balance](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/ccd318/32.png) [@Balance](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Balance)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2004, 6:09am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/the-poetry-thread/128746/33 "2004-04-26T06:09:50Z")

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_Shadow Self_

Can you really see me?  
Do you know me for what I am?  
Or do you only see  
The illusion  
Of an ordinary man?

I weave a web of shadow,  
My darkness to protect,  
And I never know  
where my soul will lie  
when the candle flickers next.

I touch the living realm  
like fingers trailing in a stream.  
a flash of fangs in darkness,  
a sleeper overwhelmed,  
and a dark and endless dream.

Can none see the monster among them?  
I’m ready for the fall.  
Let it be war,  
or a quick, clean end  
–or are you monsters…all?

This is what comes of feeling alienated and reading vampire stories at the same time. You have been warned. I find that a nice cup of hot chocolate and a copy of _The Princess Bride_ often prevent me from writing things like this.

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