“EXPLOSION ! CONCUSSION ! The vault doors burst open . And deep inside , the money is racked ready for pillage , rapine , loot . Who’s that? Who’s inside the vault?”
“Vince Heller invited me to lunch at the Clarendon Club on Commonwealth Avenue with the Chairman of the Board of Trustees of Taft University, Haller’s alma mater.”
This is from a sort of Overture to Melville’s magnum opus, an introductory pair of paragraphs followed by 81 “Extracts”, quotations in roughly chronological order from various books about whales (and, ominously, about mutinies. Melville might have originally intended to include even darker stuff in his novel. The trajectory of the book changes unpredictably several times, and there are hints of what was to be that are never fulfilled, and grand introductions of characters who don’t end up being very important.)
In any event, you have to wade through several pages of this stuff before you get to what most people think of as the opening line: “Call me Ishmael.”
We easily forget the intensive labour of being a writer before typewriters, and certainly before word-processors. It’s significant that the most frequently used term is “writer”, not “author” or “novelist”. The physical labour of dipping the quill in the ink, then writing for a bit, and re-dipping, by poor light in the evening that strained the eyes… it’s no wonder that 18th and 19th century novels sometimes had little digressions and side-ways that didn’t seem to go anywhere, and the finished volumes could be so thick. The writers may not have had the time or energy to go back and fix them or cut out extraneous bits.
“The Reach is wide and quiet this morning, the pale blue sky streaked with pink mackerel-belly clouds, the shallow sea barely rippling in the slight breeze, and so the sound of the dog barking breaks into the calm like gunshots, setting flocks of gulls crying and wheeling in the air.”
“Sliding headfirst down a vagina with no clothes on and landing in the freshly shaven crotch of a screaming woman did not seem to be part of God’s plan for me.”