# Whats Wrong with our Website?

**URL:** <https://boards.straightdope.com/t/whats-wrong-with-our-website/514585>\
**Category:** In My Humble Opinion\
**Created:** [October 21, 2009, 7:52am UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/whats-wrong-with-our-website/514585 "2009-10-21T07:52:58Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Cat\_Fight](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/90ced4/32.png) [@Cat\_Fight](https://boards.straightdope.com/u/Cat_Fight)\
**Post date:** [October 21, 2009, 5:46pm UTC](https://boards.straightdope.com/t/whats-wrong-with-our-website/514585/21 "2009-10-21T17:46:00Z")

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‘The CPI aims to support creative and environmentally sustainable initiatives that we think Charlie would have been proud of to create positive change in the Toronto community.’

Too wordy. Boil it down to half that length (‘We support causes in the community in his memory’) with a direct link (find out more /here/).

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