Wish Me Luck, I'm Pitching an Idea to NASA

Post #6.

Congratulations! (On getting your proposal accepted and published to the site, not on getting blotto.)

I hesitate to comment, because you obviously did a lot of work and most of it is beyond my scope of criticism. If what I have to offer is less than helpful, please feel free to dismiss it out of hand.

I think the written explanation of your idea could use some fine tuning.

e.g.

I do understand the word limit and other constraints, but a lot of it seems clunky to me.

I mean this as a useful critique, although I must admit I am consumed with jealously. My idea for a car powered solely by my sense of self-satisfaction was rejected.

Isaac Asimov space ship engines were often, basically, steam engines. It must be quite fun to have any sort of interaction with NASA. I would be quite proud.

(I bet you if you had data cassette programming for your car they would pay particular attention)

You’re right, it is clunky. I missed it because I was having to trim so much to meet the length requirements.

No Orbital Goat Cannon?

<Bosda gets teary-eyed>

Considering what happened to this guy who tried to build an orbital cannon, I think I’ll pass on trying to develop the idea, thank you.