About twenty minutes in, Jayne reads through Simon’s diary and recapitulates the basic plot:
“Dear Diary, today I was pompous and my sister was crazy.” (Flips page) “Today we was snatched by hill folk, never to be seen again. It was the best day ever.”
Well, that doesn’t quite cover everything, as we also get an old-west-style shootout, a bit of commentary on the hardscrabble life and superstitious ignorance of settlers on the outer moons, Book becomes the latest crewmember to take a bullet, and we learn that he has something of A Secret Past.
Very well written, methinks, (well, except for one thing that I’ll mention in a minute). Despite the need to intermesh several plotlines (the job, Simon/Kaylee, saving Book, and a lot of exposition concerning Simon and River), it all hangs together in a reasonably logical arrangment.
With that said, there’s at least one big-ass plot hole that sticks out, IMO: after the gunfight the local sheriff pays no attention whatsoever to Mal, his crew, the money, a herd of cattle with off-world brands, that they are standing around next to a spaceship littered with cow droppings, and that there is a badly wounded Shepherd laying on the ground. That’s one mighty single-minded sheriff, is all I can say.
Personal favorite line of the ep: Jayne, on being advised by Mal that it would be easier to herd the cattle by leading them, sez: “I like smackin’ 'em”.
I gather the “Big Damn Heroes” line has become rather popular amongst the Browncoats as well.
Anyway, pretty good ep, if not in my personal top five.