I think I’ve commented on this topic before here, but I’ll do so again. My problem with The Fionavar Tapestry series is that each chapter contains at least one segment that reads like it’s supposed to be the emotional climax of the entire book. Here’s a helpful comparison in case you haven’t read the novels.
Normal author: “Dave looked at the reflection of the stars on the sea and was overwhelmed by the beauty.”
Guy Gavriel Kay: "Dave looked at the reflection of the stars on the sea and beheld something that was like beauty in its natural state, unsullied by the minds and words of mortals. Here, at the cold and churning heart of the sea and beneath the celestial axis to which the infinity of stars are chained, during the height of the conjunction between all Universes past and future, a beauty was made visible, if only for the briefest of moments, a beauty that shamed even that of the Goddess herself and burned its immutable image, eternally and irrevocably, into the soul of David Alexander Martinyuik.
Normal author: “While the pair walked through the woods, Kevin turned to Beth and said ‘I love you.’”
Guy Gavriel Kay: "While the pair walked through the woods, Beth’s silence caused Kevin to feel that his footfalls were louder than the thunderbolts of Mörnir. The air around them was charged with sunlight and shadow and a force stronger still. They both could feel the surge of an invisible tide around them as Kevin turned to Beth. Thoughts flooded his mind, thoughts that were both his own and not his own, spoken and unspoken, infinite and transinfinite. Yet when Kevin, in the Forest of Anavolhaiaven, facing the woman he loved more than life itself, finally spoke, it was little more than a whisper that escaped his lips.
‘I . . .’
And Beth, acting crueller than she ever would again, cast her gaze to the ground."
I can get past the Tolkien rip-off, and I can even get past the logic-abusing ending of the third book, but I cannot get past the Kay’s over-the-top emotionalism that drips from every single page of this work.