Aspergers

Hey all. My SO is working on a paper dealing with Aspergers Syndrome that is very personal to her. I’m not looking for homework help here. Just an outsiders perspective on how the paper is shaping up.

Asperger’s Syndrome is no longer recognized as a distinct condition (from high-functioning autism) by the DSM-5.

What is this “paper” supposed to be for?

It’s a research paper for English Comp I. Thanks for the input. Just wanted to make sure it was factual. But more importantly, if the structure of the piece needed work.

You need to fix some of your grammar and syntax, especially since this is for an English Comp class.

Yes, you need a lot of structural work. But we shouldn’t be doing your homework for you, as you know.

Thanks for the help folks! Could a moderator kindly remove this thread? If not, no big deal.

Initialisms and acronyms are capitalized, but not, necessarily, the long forms they represent.

Bipolar disorder, attention deficit disorder, Asperger’s syndrome, sensory processing disorder. . . .

[QUOTE=Darth_Hamsandwich’s SO]
Life with a child whom has a disability like hers …
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Should be “who has”.

What is the actual assignment? Is it an opinion piece or an informative piece?

6 replies on the paper itself.
5 of which pertaining to grammar and syntax.
1 on the actual content.

I know I’m in the right place.

It’s an English Comp paper I think that’s about the right ratio.

Since the OP doesn’t care, I’m going to lock this.