For English, I had to argue FOR Capital Punishment, but im not happy about how it was written, its not one of my better works. Anyway, the Teeming Millions being good debators, I was wondering if you had any way to critique my work here::
For thousands of years, humans across the world practiced the death penalty for serious crimes. Today, Americans still practice this concept as with almost all other countries of the world. Several State Congresses have outlawed the death penalty in their states leaving some states with and some without the death penalty. Which raises the question, Should the National Government enforce the death penalty? Many politicians have been in favor of the penalty because it is necessary to maintain the current favorable domestic security. This is true because the punishment dissuades potential murderers, disables more murders from the convicts, and gives the victim’s family proper retribution.
Some argue that this is too harsh a punishment, however it is necessary, and one reason that capital punishment is positive is that it disables current murderers from repeating the crime. There are many references in the past to jail house killings. A convicted murderer repeats his crime and kills a fellow inmate. It is the duty of the government to protect their inmates, especially those who will some day be a normal citizen again.
Capital punishment has been seen necessary for several reasons. One reason is to dissuade potential murderers. An example of this is a bank robber restrains from shooting the banker because, if caught, the punishment for stealing is much “better” then the possible death penalty. This is just one of many cases in which a victims lives had been saved from the capital punishment laws.
Death penalty also helps in keeping the peace that could be disturbed by victim’s family’s feel for a need of retribution. One story stands perfect example of this. A known drug dealer murdered a young teen’s brother. The boy, being devastated, looked for revenge, even if it meant his own arrest. He got a gun and was going to kill the murderer when he realized that he could get the same reprisal from the court system, but not sacrifice his future. Capital punishment, in this case, prevented another tragic street- murder.
Capital Punishment has been seen effective in keeping the peace, dissuading potential murderers, and preventing violent convicts from more killing. Abolishing the Capital punishment laws would see to the increasing of fatal incidents and tragedies. Therefore, while seemingly harsh, it is necessary for maintaining the peace and order that we so desire in America.
Too many examples? Doesnt flow right? I need some help here.
-P.K.
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