Essay Placement Test "gems," the next chapter!

As some of you know, occasionally I post a bunch of so-called “gems” that I gather from some of the many assessment tests that I help score at a college. These are essay tests that help us to place students into ESL or English classes at various levels. Below is the most recent collection of gems, with all errors, glitches, and weirdness left intact. Enjoy, and feel free to spread them around.

Gems, Winter/Spring 2007:
John Locke was the founder of the Declaration of Independence.

Insurance helps protect you from any harmful sources such as the flu.

My father passed away in a fatal accident, leaving my brothers and I as bastards.

Happiness is many different things to many different people: a wedding day or a dentist visit.

Every good man has a woman in his behind.

When reality hits me in the face, I chew it, and out spits something positive.

There are many electronical devices inhibiting the world today.

There are two bad things in life: sex without a condom and going over your minutes.

I like the feeling of accomplishing the worst.

Without happiness there be kaos.

She is there to say “nothing is worse than thinking you peed your pants in church.”

I kept a cool and leveled head.

Oregon is an outgoing state!

She continued to ejaculate derisions.

During my years of living I learned alots of things from games, sports, school and last but not least sex aswell.

One day I were to be their as well and I would be one of those successful without a career if I decide to not go to college but all is well because my plan is to go to college if my plan fails.

The word of God (Bible) is backed up by science, when it says how the earth is round before Columbus ever knew it.

He would come back the next day drunk with hickies.

Human beings have never been sedimentary.

I enjoy watching diversity of birds and insects passing through my eyes.

The television could be a waist-of-time or it could be really reproductive.

It’s a doggie dog world.

The student was shiting on his test. [cheating]

As a child my mother was a single parent.

The only thing that will hurt you is, if you let stress and anger crumble you down into a paper ball.

For me especially Disney movies I don’t like because inside the movies are negative messages, bad manners, bad words and magic things that can affect our children’s brain.

Cell phones are very useful when you run into an accident.

The earthquake measured 6.0 on the rectal scale.

To discover a good thing on TV would be like looking for a fresh lettuce in a trash can.

Well, more like finding fresh lettuce. But yeah, what he said.

Well, I know it’s the scale *I *always use!

Bwahaha!

Every good man has a woman in his behind.
There are just far too many ways to snerk at this.

There are many electronical devices inhibiting the world today.
Oh, how true. Look at the computerized voting machines…

There are two bad things in life: sex without a condom and going over your minutes.
Oh man, I hate going over my minutes…

I like the feeling of accomplishing the worst.
Mission accomplished!

Without happiness there be kaos.
Roger Waters nods approvingly.

I kept a cool and leveled head.
And the police would like to know where it is.

She continued to ejaculate derisions.
It took hours to clean up, too.

He would come back the next day drunk with hickies.
I remember many a party where I brought my own hickies and got totally wasted. Good times.

Human beings have never been sedimentary.
Except for those who piss off mafia dons.

I enjoy watching diversity of birds and insects passing through my eyes.
Next time, keep your visor down and stop riding so fast.

The television could be a waist-of-time or it could be really reproductive.
I’ve been trying to breed my TV in the hopes of getting a 52" plasma, but so far I haven’t had any luck.

It’s a doggie dog world.
Snoop nods approvingly.

The student was shiting on his test.
Hey, I think he went to my high school.

As a child my mother was a single parent.
Yeah. Once you hit 8, you’re practically a spinster.

For me especially Disney movies I don’t like because inside the movies are negative messages, bad manners, bad words and magic things that can affect our children’s brain.
Disney really developed a dark streak when they hired Quentin Tarantino.

The earthquake measured 6.0 on the rectal scale.
All things in moderation – including fiber.

To discover a good thing on TV would be like looking for a fresh lettuce in a trash can.
This kid’s got potential.

Antiquated, but a technically correct statement…still… :smack:

Believe me, we ejaculate derisions in the direction of our students all the time…They just don’t know it. :wink:

Hey, I learned English as a second language myself, so I am exempt from being PC about these :wink: :stuck_out_tongue: :smiley:

In one you experience short-term pain to be relieved of long-term pain, in the other…

Oddly put, but technically accurate. Except for some extreme charismatic churches where you’re expected to lose all control…

ditto, except for the church part. Who has not learned something important from sex? (such as: it can be really bad w/o a condom, whether or not you keep minutes…)

Add the prefix “bull-” and you’ve described how I remember several of my Humanities/SocSci sections back in the day.

Hey, another statement of fact: that WOULD hurt. Even ignoring your transmutation into paper.

Well, during an earthquake 6.0 or above my rectum **will ** be clenched in so powerfully it probably WILL be the safest place to be.

Comment by Mr. S: “Been watching too much Get Smart, eh?”

I really, really like this one.

Here is a link to a previous thread which contains the link to the prior volumes of gems, in case you folks wish to see them as well:

http://boards.straightdope.com/sdmb/showthread.php?t=401289&highlight=assessment

Post #16.

No. Without Maxwell Smart there be KAOS.

never mind - wrong thread