I just posted this sentence in another thread. I reads badly. How should I have fixed it? :smack:
I hear of groups sending medication that would be tossed because it has expired overseas for people who cannot afford the drugs.
I have heard that some groups send medicine overseas to people who cannot afford drugs, although the medicine is already expired, and would be tossed out here.
I hear of groups sending medication, that would be tossed because it has expired, overseas for people who cannot afford the drugs.
Or, perhaps:
I hear of groups sending medication, which would otherwise be tossed because it has expired, overseas for people who cannot afford the drugs.
There are people overseas who cannot afford drugs. I have heard that there are groups that send expired medications, which would otherwise be discarded, to these people.
I’ve heard of domestic organizations that salvage expired prescription medication in the U.S. and send it to needy people abroad.
My cat’s breath smells like cat food.
Your momma sews socks that smell.
… but, seriously…
I’ve heard of domestic organizations who salvage expired prescription medication in the U.S. and send it to needy people abroad.
I’ve heard of groups that send expired prescription drugs overseas to those who can’t afford it, instead of throwing it away.
Fix this sentence, please!
I’ve heard of groups who send expired medicines overseas to people who cannot afford effective medications.
I think it’s understood that expired medications are thrown out in the rest of the world.
“I’ve heard someone’s sending crap old drugs to needy foreigners”? 
I hear of groups sending expired medication overseas for people who cannot afford to buy medicine legitimately in their own country.
See, like, there’s, like, this stuff, right, like drugs ‘n shit, sent out to, like, them furriners what don’t got no money or nothin’, and it’s, like, waaaaaaaay past it’s use-by, y’nowoti’sayin’?
expired foreign medicated groupies?
I c ded peepill!
Street:
Yo, word is there’s these gangs pushing meds to broke-ass crackheads worldwide that ain’t worth shit cuz they’s straight laced.
Politician:
It has come to my attention that there are certain sets of individuals who have been illegally smuggling dangerously antiquated narcotics to foreign black markets with the express purpose of taking advantage of lower-income users.
Pig Latin:
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I hear of tossed people sending expired medication groups overseas because that would be who cannot afford the drugs.
I worked on this without looking at the other suggestions and came up with the same thing as GaryT, i.e. adding two commas.