From this thread, I expressed my concern that Irving Berlin’s GBA needs a second verse.
Take a crack at it.
We’ll all critique.
Constructively. Of course. Constructively.
Go ahead.
I dare ya.
“God Bless America!”
"Land that has a constitution that… Well… Such things don’t speak to the equality of America. What we need is a patrotic song that will stand up for what is right in verse. If I am elected the song, I will not have a litmus test for cadences. This is one of the main issues in American songcraft today, and we must be resolute on issues such as these the present issues to the issue-concerned American vocalist.
"
There is America.
Just so you know
You can find her, she’s right there
Just Between Canada ‘nd Mexico
From Long Island, to Nebraska,
To Los Angeles, its real far
There is America
Don’t go by car