How would you rewrite this sentence?

In My Humble Opinion
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I say don’t overthink it and leave the statement as it is. If there are those that don’t like it well, they can GFT.

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If you are worried over whether the verb should be “is” or “are”, then also worry over if “while we still have that” should be “while we still have those”.

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Health. Safety. Paramount.

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Health good. Safety good. Ogg afraid of fire.

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skip the overly wordy paragraph and use this

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“As you value your life or your reason stay away from the moor”.