Tars:
[spoiler]I think the Engels Brothers were another of those little-bit-off references. Like in one of the Great War books, either Custer/Dowling or Morrell was introduced to a fast-rising young officer named DANIEL MacArthur, not Douglas. Circumstances were just different enough to change his first name.
I know the real Marx brothers were from Chicago, not New York, and that really was their name. Don’t know enough about them to know if that was an “Ellis Island name” or not, but I’m going to assume that, again, circumstances led to the name Engels rather than Marx. At any rate, that WAS the Marx brothers as they would have been in this timeline! I like them better the way they really were, though. Fake dyed beards…ugh!
Speaking of entertainment people, did you catch Mary McG. thinking, “There’s some motion picture actress they say has ‘It’…” Clara Bow, in case you were wondering
Mr. Rilch said, after the last book, “I wonder if we’ll ever see Rodriguez again?” He hasn’t read that far yet, but he’ll flip when he does!
Dowling seems really to have grown into his authority. He’s taken on Custer’s habits of growling and second-guessing, but he doesn’t take his own adjutant for granted. Good for him!
After Bartlett, I kept wondering, “Who’s going to be the other person to die?” No main characters died, besides him, but there were quite a few secondary losses! Marie Galtier, Hal Jacobs, Custer, TR, and Coolidge. Quite a body-count. But people are getting older, after all; it’s now been 20 years since the first Great War book.
Also, my heart weeps for Scipio/Xerxes. He’s become one of my favorites. I KNOW his past is going to catch up to him somehow. Maybe he’ll use his gift of speech to advantage. Or maybe he’ll be first against the wall.[/spoiler]
I don’t think the action moves unnecessarily fast. Some of these “kids”, like Cincinnatus’ son Achilles, have been around since the Great War. And as someone pointed out after “Blood and Iron”, a lot of people did come home and make babies after the Great War, same as they did after WWII, and this way, the ones who are children now will be adults during WWII.
The only one who seems out of continuity is Mary. She turned seven in 1914 or early 1915, then in 1924, she’s thirteen?
One thing I have noticed, though, is that Turtledove never shows weddings “on screen” except for once. I’m sure you know the once…and how it turned out. Now I know that if I ever again see someone in a bridal gown, the scene will end badly.
Not a spoiler: I misread the name of the engineer who broadcasts Featherston’s speeches. “OMG! Is this what Sam Goldwyn does, instead of movies?” But I don’t think it was a ref, just me being hasty.
Also not a spoiler, but I haven’t heard so many anti-Semitic cracks since Book 1. I’m sure groundwork is being set.