If A Christmas Carol had been written by someone else

**The Ballad of Ebenezer Scrooge
***by Stephen Sondheim

*Attend the tale of Ebenezer Scrooge.
His soul was small, his wealth was huge.
If truth be told, a wretched boor,
He swindled the rich and exploited the poor.
He counted his coins, both small and huge,
Did Ebenezer Scrooge,
The demon miser of Fleet Street.

He kept a shop in London town
But paid his workers with barely a crown.
One of them was Cratchit by name,
Whose youngest son was small and lame.
And what if one of them dared to complain
He’d throw the beggar out in the rain,
Yes, Ebenezer,
Ebenezer Scrooge,
The demon miser of Fleet Street.

Count your silver high, Ebenezer!
Count it to the skies!
Freely flows the gold from those who moralize.

His needs were few, his room was bare.
A chest of gold and a sturdy chair.
A sleeping gown and a flickering lamp,
A miserly spirit, cold and damp.
For boundless greed and avarice huge,
Ebenezer Scrooge,
The demon miser of Fleet Street.

And then one year on Christmas Eve,
An apparition did Scrooge perceive,
It was the ghost of Marley in fact,
Who warned Ebenezer to change his act.
His only hope, though he would fear it,
Was to be visited by three spirits.

The first of which left Scrooge aghast,
For it was the ghost of Christmas past.
It showed him a life from high above,
Devoid of friends, devoid of love.

The Second spirit was Christmas present,
Showed him a scene happy and pleasant.
The Cratchit family ‘round their table,
With Tiny Tim (who was disabled).

The ghost of Christmas yet to come
Shows poor Scrooge a future glum.
A life that’s wasted with no remorse,
Not even a grave for his rotting corpse.

Scrooge was richer, Scrooge was fatter,
Scrooge would blink, and beggars would scatter.
Scrooge was richer, Scrooge was fatter,
Scrooge would blink, and beggars would scatter.
Scrooge was richer, Scrooge was fatter,
Scrooge would blink, and beggars would scatter.
Scrooge was richer, Scrooge was fatter,
Scrooge would blink, and beggars would scatter.

Ebenezer! Ebenezer! Ebenezer! Ebenezer!
EBENEZER!

Attend the take of Ebenezer Scrooge!
His soul was small but his wealth was huge.
What happened then, well that’s the play,
and he wouldn’t want us to give it away . . .

Not Ebenezer,
Not Ebenezer Scrooge,
The demon miser of Fleet . . .

. . . Street.

**Ebenezer Shrugged
***by Ayn Rand
*
“Who is Jacob Marley?”
The light of London was ebbing, and Ebenezer Scrooge cold not distinguish the lame boy’s face.
“Why did you say that?” asked Scrooge, his voice tense.
The lame boy leaned against his weather-beaten crutch.
“Why does it bother you?” he asked.
“It doesn’t,” snapped Scrooge.

*1165 pages later:
*
“The road is cleared,” said Scrooge. “I am going back to my shop and my fortune.”
He raised his hand, and over the desolate city of London he traced in space the sign of the dollar.

Damn, I should have made that the British Pound.:smack:

Alan: So, Charlie, aren’t you coming to the family Christmas get together? Jake’s getting ready?

Charlie: Does it look like I’m going to the family Chrsitmas get together? Those things always end up a disaster. I’d rather stay here with my two good friens Johnnie Walker and Jack Daniels.

Alan: You’re leaving me to face them all by myself. Mom’s invited Berta! And Judith! Charlie, I can’t do it!

Charlie throws two ornaments at him: Here, use these Christmas balls.

Jake enters, Jake: Oh, I get it. You’re telling Dad to grown a pair. Pretty good, Uncle Charlie.

Charlie: You guys leave for the festivities. I’m going to get some sleep.

Alan & Jake leave. Charlie falls asleep on the couch.

Enter Evelyn Harper

Charlie: MOM! You scared the crap out of me.

Evelyn: I am the Ghost of Christmas Past. I’ve come to show you why you hate Christmas.

Charlie: I know why I hate Christmas. You and your current lover would leave me and Alan alone in the house every freaking Christmas. We use to get drunk and set the tree on fire.

Evelyn: You know, I always wondered what happened to the ornaments. Every year I’d spend money on silver and gold and every year we couldn’t find last year’s ornaments.

Charlie: Oh, we took the ornaments off first. We use to sell them in the neighborhood.

Evelyn: I always left you plenty of food and presents. What did you need the money for?

Charlie: We never could open the lock on the liquor cabinet.

Evelyn leaves. Rose comes in.

Charlie: ROSE! You scared the crap out of me.

Rose: I am the Ghost of Christmas Present. I’m here to show you the wonderful time everyone else is having.

Rose shows a scene of Alan, Jake, Judith, her current young guy, and Berta sitting down to dinner.

Alan: Now, I’ll carve the roast.

Evelyn: No, Alan, you let Mummy do it.

Alan: I’m the man here–

Judith: Yeah, right. (swigs some wine)

Alan: And it’s my job to carve the holiday roast.

Evelyn: So how is your Christmas going, Jake?

Jake: Well, I’ve got a book report to do for school. But I’ve got plenty of time.

Judith: It’s the book report that was due over Thanksgiving vacation.

Jake: Oh, yeah, right. But I’ve got plenty of time.

Berta: Who wants some more scotch?

Everyone: Here, here.

Berta: And I think this is a good way to spend a holiday. Well, it’s better than being with family in the freezing cold trailer, fighting over tacos.

Alan is enthusiatically carving the roast. Suddenly it flies, breaking a window and making an escape.

Judith: What are the odds of that happening again

Evelyn, obviously drunk: What are the odds of that happening five years in a row? Alan, I told you to let me carve.

Alan: Oh, well. (swigs some booze).

Rose: Boy, I can see why you don’t want to be there.

Enter Berta

Charlie: BERTA! You scared the crap out of me.

Berta: I am the Ghost of Christmas Yet To Come.

Charlie: Well, Ghost, speaking of crap, clean the bathroom and get out.

Berta: I am here to show you your future.

Scene of Charlie, now considerably older, sitting on the couch with a bottle of booze, surrounded by the same Christmas decorations.

Charlie: So?

Berta: Okay, here’s the reaction to your death.

Alan & Rose looking considerably older.

Alan: I can’t believe he’s finally gone. After five liver transplants.

Rose: Guy lived a lot longer than he should have.

Alan: And he left me his house.

Rose; Lucky you

Alan: Mortgaged to the hilt. I’ll have to sell it for taxes

Rose: Too bad. Why couldn’t Jake get to the funeral?

Alan: Rose! He’s still on Death Row

Rose: Oh, yeah.

Enter Evelyn Harper, tastefully dressed in black, looking the same and with the same young guy she had at Christmas Present.

Evelyn: Well, I’m glad that’s over. Me and Juan are spending the holidays in the Bahamas.

Alan: Where did you get the money?

Evelyn: Since Charlie never married, I was still the beneficiary on his life insurance. Thank Jake for killing his uncle for me–double indemnity.

Alan: Too bad Jake got caught with victim number six. If he had stopped at Charlie, he would have gotten away with it.

Evelyn: Gets away with the rest, and is caught violating the body of Berta.

Evelyn leaves.

Rose: What now?

Alan: Johnnie Walker and Jack Daniels.

Rose: I’m there with you.

Shot of Jake in prison cell: And God Bless Us Everyone!

Cal–

I hope you don’t mind, but I posted your Lovecraftian version on a message board I recently joined (with attribution, of course). We have a Lovecraft Humor thread going.

some of these are, indeed, brilliant. just want to say thanks to all!

The Ghost of Christmas Past (face of a schnauzer, body of an eel, three arms, vaguely Russian accent) is taking Obi-Ben Keneezer into his past.

“And there you are… you were a little boy. Your mother saved for two parsecs- DON’T EVEN GO THERE!- to buy you that light saber.”

Ben: I don’t recall ever having owned a light saber…

GCP: Don’t start that again! You don’t recall ever having owned a droid, ridden in a land speeder, being a Jedi apprentice, or going to Coruscant, just what in the name of the Seven Suns of Sigmius do you recall?

Ben: I don’t recall telling you any of those things.

GCP: Well the point is this, me boogie-wu, you have lost the spirit of Christmas. See the boy over there? His poinsettian levels are off the charts, and yet yours barely register. We need to give you boosters.

The Ghost of Christmas Past [William F. Buckley bound in harpsichord wires] is showing Ebeneezer Luther Vidal Scrooge a Christmas from 1961.

GCP: I should suspect there should be fluency of the language psychic in the placement within your cognition of this particular event, this rapprochement between the state of your being now and the state in which you lived then. I daresay re-cognition should alert yourself to the significance and surroundings hereof and the festoonery beacon the keepers even in the emptiness of your harbor spiritual the season.

ELVS: Of course. Camp David, 1962. That’s me over there by Caroline Yakovoevna Radzivilla, Princess of Olyka, better known to me and to roughly a division of former lovers and creditors as the former Carrie Lee Bouvier, late of the famous sisters act, Golddiggers of the Capitol. My God was I once that thin.

G: And why in a room whose further inhabitants include the most powerful man in the free world and as near, regretful as the judgment of history may be, to an Irish Catholic martyr as this nation, or at least this region of the nation, shall aspire, however lamentable his politik, do you palaver with the third and unacknowledged by the church Catholic and universal bride of a deposed minor nobleman?

E: Executive order one might say. Jack and I had a falling out around this time due to my advising him the Military Industrial Complex would never allow him to withdraw troops from any place where they deemed said troops should be and of course as the nation’s new owners their request really should have been treated with more respect. The exponentiality of camp following sutlers wagons now through the magical kiss of Krupp and the bankers of whom the Prince Olyka, multimarried and tangential, was a representative, the chicken legs of bellicose finance propping the Baba Yaga of tangential aristocratic legitimacy. Ah, memories. Jackie was the most self absorbed of humans though I must give her that she was lovely, the David of ice sculpture, but she loved to play the intellectual and since I was so conveniently in the family in the broadest definition of that term and was restored to the bestseller lists of the Times if not their reviews- that would take years- and then be negative- of course their critics derive from the same ivyless walls I scorn twice before my morning ablutions and mostly from an ethnarchy that still presses claims to a 3,500 year old land grant I suppose grudges against me are not to be a source of surprise. They reviewed you nicely as memory serves, or perhaps I am thinking of the New Republic. Either way it must have consoled you greatly, some warmth in the iciness of a bed emptied by the interrment of dear Senator McCarthy…

GCP: Listen to the president…

[from Camp David- JFK is reading aloud Letters to Santa sent to him from the Post Office, various members of the family are crying with sentimentality, save for the guffaw coming from the Princess and her gay attendant and in-law in-law]

JFK: Ah, listen to this one then, ‘Dear Santa, I know—’ he spells that N O- ‘I know that I shoont be selfish and ask for toys but I want a doll it not for me for my sick baby sister may be her last Chrizmas…’

Chorus of courtiers: Awwwwww… let’s send her the most expensive doll there is… five of them…

JFK: ‘Ah, and anuthah… ‘Dear Santa, I just woan my papa home from Vietnam doan know where that is can you bring him in your slay…’ spelled in s-l-a-y!’"

Courtiers: Awwwww… any chance you can bring him home Jack?

JFK: ‘Oh my God… listen to this one… ‘Dear Santa… can you jus sho me how i can be better for my mom and the presdent’…’

Courtiers: Awwwwwwwww…
1962 ELVS: …and said to him, Hughdie, if it smells like cod then we’re tailor maid since you’re shaped like a fish hook…
Princess: HAH HAH AHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Courtiers: [stunned silence]

GCP: So the sentimentality of the moment was vaporized somewhat by the heat of your viciousness I presume…

ELV: Not at all. I’ve thought many times about those letters.

GCP: Really?

ELV: Indeed. I think of those letters and say to myself, or to whoever is near, which preferably is somebody with a camera and relatively large audience, 'How odd it is that most Americans would be hard pressed to write a coherent letter to Santa… an annotated shopping list would be the equal of graduate work for half of them… and yet Jack was assassinated, and Bobby was assassinated… no loss there really… Wallace, others… all assassinated by people who not only wrote coherently but… kept diaries! Presumably next to their chamberpots and whale oil lamps with other relics of Victoriana for certainly no other American of their station seems capable of daily records… and not only did they keep diaries, but the diaries are the same… ‘Dear Diary, I am a psychotic loner who intends to kill herein named important personage and I am acting alone. There is no conspiracy, it’s just insane little me. Odd that the deaths will benefit the Military Industrial Complex of course but seek not logic where the insane are concerned, and in case you haven’t guessed it, I am insane. And alone.’ How often I’ve wondered if Sirhan Sirhan and Oswald and Bremer and their brethren had the same handwriting as well. Ah, Christmas memories.

GCP: I cannot broker judgment betwixt the past and the present for which is the greater vulgary. I can only say both are… oh… meretricious…

ELV: Meretricious to you too, and a happy New Year. Now let’s be gone as if I remember correctly this is when Capote arrived. There’s a shade I need not see again, no doubt he’s in Hell regaling Persphone even as we speak with tales of how he fellated Lee Harvey Oswald in the pool house at Camp David this very Christmas all while Hades looks on with annoyance and plans an assignation with whatever call girl is his current secret queen. And speaking of secret queens, you should be returning to your family as well…

Unfortunately I can’t provide the pictures, but it begins with Little Susie’s father recalling being a boy in Santa’s lap and ends with Little Susie’s father burning in Hell.

A Christmas Carol “Ghost” thread.
How appropriate.

Dr. Fidelius – thanks for telling me. Let me know how it fares.

While I did not write this, I dont think the original author will mind if I add it to this thread. Its part of the Terry Goodkind parody thread from Westros.org. (Actually, I think the SDMB should do a Goodkind parody thread of their own, there is so much material you would have a field day.
An Objectivist Carol by Terry Goodkind
Yes! and the bedpost was his own. The bed was his own, the room was his own. Best and happiest of all, the Time before him was his own, to make amends in!

“I will live in the Past, the Present, and the Future!” Scrooge repeated, as he scrambled out of bed. “The Spirits of all Three shall strive within me. Oh Jacob Marley! Heaven, and the Christmas Time be praised for this. I say it on my knees, old Jacob, on my knees!”

He was so fluttered and so glowing with his good intentions, that his broken voice would scarcely answer to his call. He had been sobbing violently in his conflict with the Spirit, and his face was wet with tears.

“They are not torn down!” cried Scrooge, folding one of his bed-curtains in his arms, “they are not torn down, rings and all. They are here – I am here – the shadows of the things that would have been, may be dispelled. They will be! I know they will.”

Scrooge’s joyous effusions were interrupted by an unusual sound. Unpleasantly skin crawling, it sounded like teeth grinding against teeth. Suppressing a shudder, Scrooge’s eyes flew around the room until they located the source of the sound.

Scrooge gasped. Standing in the middle of his bedroom was a man wielding a sword. While grinding his teeth together, the man’s unibrowed forehead sloped downward in a frown of disapproval. His outfit was black. And leather.

Before Scrooge could demand an explanation for the intrusion the man grabbed the front of Scooge’s nightshirt and lifted him from the ground.

“I am Richard Rahl, the Spirit of Objectivism Now. You are my prisoner.”

“Another spirit?!” gasped Scrooge. “But Marley said there would only be three!”

“Jacob Marley is an altruistic scumbag. I killed him. Just as I killed the ghosts of Christmas Past, Present, and Future.” And indeed, Scrooge could see that Richard’s sword was still stained with blood.

“B-but how? They’re ghosts! I don’t see how you could have killed them!”

Richard’s face turned beet red and he screamed through his clenched teeth. In a fury, Richard dropped the sword and proceeded to bitchslap Scrooge.

“A contradiction can exist neither in whole nor in part!” Richard bellowed through his clenched teeth, while his raptor eyes threw daggers through Scrooge’s.

Scrooge had a feeling that this was all the answer he was going to get out of Richard.

“Um, why exactly are you here?’

Screaming in rage (through his clenched teeth) Richard scooped his sword from the floor and hacked off Scrooge’s left hand.

“Speak only when spoken to!” Richard hissed through his teeth.

For a long time, Scrooge could only howl in agony as he tried to staunch the flow of blood from his bleeding stump. The sight of so much blood and human suffering seemed to ease Richard’s anger. He let go of Scrooge’s nightshirt and let the old man topple to the floor. A look of almost sexual ecstasy enslaved Richard’s face as he watched Scrooge writhe on the floor.

Richard’s teeth were still clenched.

“I’m here to undo the damage those collectivist swine wrought last night,” spat Richard in deadly earnest through his narrowed eyes. “Come!” Richard hauled Scrooge across his back like a sack of potatoes and jumped through the window.

Unlike the other ghosts, the Spirit of Objectivism Now did phase through the glass, but rather shattered it and he and Scrooge fell to the street below.

Grinding his teeth and dusting off snow, Richard loped down the street, pushing unwary pedestrians out of his way. Soon enough, Richard and Scrooge arrived at the Cratchit residence.
Instead of knocking, Richard hacked the door to pieces with his ever present sword and strode into the humbling dwelling with a masculine swagger.

Dumping the old man onto the floor, Richard proceeded to make himself at home. Scrooge could only watch in horror as Richard kneed Bob Crachit in the groin and took his place at the breakfast table and started to inhale the meager repast Mrs. Crachit had prepared for her family. The inhaling process was somewhat complicated by the fact that Richard was still firmly clenching his teeth. Most of the food ended up smeared across his face.

Sated, Richard belched and undid the drawstring on his masculine, leather traveling pants in order to let his gut more freely hang out after gorging himself.

“Down to business!” Richard clapped his hand together. Before Scrooge or the Crachit family knew what was happening, Richard launched into an exhaustive 12 hour speech on the evils of altruism, charity, goodwill, and compassion. Scrooge could slowly began to feel his old self again and by the time the speech ended, Scrooge had fully recanted his recent conversion.

“Only one way to make sure you’re really genuine about this,” Richard declared as he advanced on Tiny Tim. “Do exactly as I do, and you can consider yourself a True Objectivist! Boot, be true this day!” before anyone could react, Richard drew back his leg and unleashed a mighty and manly kick that shatter Tiny Tim’s jaw and severed his tongue.

Scrooge crowed and picked out a Cratchit child of his own to kill. Soon Richard and Scrooge had kicked ever underage jaw in the Cratchit hosehold.

Panting between his now clenched teeth, Scrooged vowed to never again to let the Christmas spirit corrupt his individuality.

And Scrooge was better than his word. He did it all and infinitely more. Scrooge compounded Bob Cratchit’s grief by foreclosing on his mortgage, thus driving his own loyal clerk to commit suicide. A widow, and now childless, Mrs. Cratchit was driven to prostitution in order to earn a living. He became as good an Objectivist, as good a Capitalist, as good an Individualist as the good old city knew, or any other good old city, town, or borough, in the good old world had ever been blighted with. Some people laughed to see that nothing had changed in him, but he let them laugh, and then drove them into poverty and hired goons to harass their family. For many years to come, Scrooge would grind the faces of the poor.

He had further intercourse with the Spirit of Objectivism Now, who would constantly show up at his home to order him around and demand further obedience in the name of individualism and it was always said of him, that he knew how to keep Objectivism well, if any man alive possessed the knowledge. May that be truly said of us, and all of us! And so, as Richard Rahl observed, Ayn Rand Bless Us, Every One!

A Christmas Carol
Entourage

Ari- Don’t you fuckin go there Spielberg, don’t you fuckin go there! I am not going keep my ass in this office all fuckin’ night trying to get a part for my guy! It’s Christmas eve for Christ’s sake!..What do you want me to do? I cant just…Fuck! Steve hold on it’s my wife, and if you’re gone when I click this over I swear to God I will drive to your office and shove a christmas tree up your ass…Honey, yes I know it’s Christmas eve and I will be home before the kids go to sleep so I can Santa my ass up and being them their expensive crap…OK…Love you too…Spelberg? FUCK!

(In comes Marley…Vince)

Vince-Ari, man what are you doing here? At this time of night? Don’t you know what day it is?

Ari- No no no man, what are you fucking doing here? I did not send you on a fucking plane to fucking nowheres town just to have you show up in my office on Christmas fucking eve!

Vince- But Ari, I’m not physically here…this is just my spirit…

Ari- Then your spirit better voodoo itself back into your fucking body, so that it can swing Spielberg in to putting you in his movie.

Vince- I’m here to give you a warning. You will be visited by three ghosts tonight, each to show you a different Christmas you have worked, and neglected your family.

Ari- Yeah? Well how’s this for a warning. Get your FUCKING spirit into your FUCKING body before I call Eli Roth and have him cast you in his newest torture porn, where you’ll be fondling fake bloody balls in the back of a FUCKING cabin in Jersey!

Vince- Hey whatever man, just trying to help. It’s not all bad though, trust me, these guys are cool, and they’ll make everything better. (Vince disappears)

Ari- (Yelling to the now disappeared Vince) Getting a movie part would be making it better!

Lloyd- Hey Ari…

Ari (Startled by the sudden sound)- Holy shit Lloyd! What the HELL are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be at your place getting some guys’ Rudolph’s red nose up your ass?

Lloyd- Come on Ari that’s not funny! I am your first ghost, and you have to respect what I say

Ari- I don’t care if you’re the gay grim fucking reaper coming to take me on the river styx to hades, there is no way I am going to listen to anything you say right now.

Lloyd (Stamps foot)- Come on Ari! Just come to the past with me and we can get this over with…

Ari- Jesus Christ fine! I’ll go to the fucking past with you, but I swear to God Lloyd if this takes more than 20 minutes you and your flaming red ass will be out on the street peddling C-list actors for their managers just so you can afford a fuckin Elton John record!

Lloyd (Claps)- Yay!

             (Lloyd takes Ari to the past, shows him his stuff, then drops him off in his office....)

Lloyd- See? Didn’t we learn something?

Ari- Yeah, I learned never go to a press junket with a drunk Skeet Ulrich…

Lloyd- You were supposed to learn about love!

Ari- Yeah well, if you don’t get out of my office I am going to “love” your ass from here to Laguna Beach…and that wasn’t an invite. Get the fuck out.

Lloyd disappears and in walks Drama

Ari- Ho-ly shit I just went from bad to worse!

Drama- What? You sayin’ I’m worse than Lloyd? Pshh you got a lot to look forward to then

Ari- I don’t have shit to look forward to. I get to look forward to getting through you people so I can go the fuck home.

Drama- Hey what a coincidence! Your home is where we are goin, cuz man, you gotta SEE this chick at your house man, I’m tellin ya, if I wasn’t a ghost right now…I’d be riding that shit til new years!

Ari- Hey dickweed, you talk like that about my fuckin wife like that one more time and I swear to God I will cut your dick off and give it to Lloyd for a TOY!

Drama- Hey hey, I wasn’t talkin about her man, I was talkin bout her fine ass sister

Ari- What-fucking-ever let’s just get this over with because I, unlike SOME PEOPLE, have shit to do.

Drama- Jeez man, settle down…gettin all riled and shit…

                       (Ari and Drama go to the present, and end up back in Ari's office)

Drama- I’m tellin you man, if she could have seen me, I’da had that bitch bumpin!

Ari- If she could have seen you she would have been “bumpin” her ass back to Reno where she can fuck a guy who’s twice as rich and three times as good looking as you. Now are you done with me? Cuz as you can see I have kids to see, alcohol to drink, and a wife to fuck.

Drama- Fine fine…but you got one more ghost comin, a scary one who’s gonna show you what your future will be if you work this hard. (Drama disappears)

Ari- Christ another one of these things to go to. (Yells at the celing) Goddammit Vince I have more important things to do than follow your fucking friends around! You better have that fucking part, or I am going to KILL you and MAKE you a goddamn ghost.

Turtle- Hey Ari. I’m here.

Ari- Christ they save YOU for last?

Turtle (shrugs)- Hey, personally I wanted to be the first one, but whatever. Wanna see your future?

Ari- You mean do I wanna waste another 20 fucking minutes of my life listening to you blab on and on about shit I don’t about while my FUCKING FAMILY WAITS FOR ME AT HOME?!?

Turtle- Hey man, I don’t make the rules, I just follow em ya know? So let’s go do this thing and we’ll see where it goes…

                               (Ari and Turtle go into the future)

Turtle- So you see man? You aren’t lookin good if you keep workin on Christmas eve like this.

Ari- I’ll tell you whats not looking good. It’s not looking good that you, Vince, OR Drama are ever going to step foot into my office again because you have wasted my entire fucking night on stupid shit. The reason I am working so late on Christmas eve is because you people keep fucking me in the ASS while I’m trying to do my job. Now take your spirit ass and leave me alone so that I can keep your body alive by getting Vince some goddamn work! (Picks up his cell phone, dials) Ste-ven! Did you set up a time to meet with Vince?.. No?.. Are you fucking serious? Well why not?..I swear to God I will pay you 5,000 fucking dollars right now to just meet with the guy, do ya want that? Do ya want five grand? How about this, I am sending you, right now, the 5 grand, and I don’t care if you spend it on a giant fucking TURKEY or if you use it to wipe your ASS, you just get my client in there or I will personally make you pay for it you got me? That’s right you fucking got me! (Pushes off button, grabs his jacket and pushes more cell phone buttons) Honey? It’s me…That’s right I’m just leaving now…uncork the good wine, pour me a big fucking glass, and tell your sister she better keep her fucking mouth shut or I will send Johnny drama to her house to fuck her til she shuts up.
The End

Thank you for doing so. It should become an annual tradition.

Brilliant stuff. Nowhere else in the known universe has so much wit and energy been expended to such a good end.

Wish I had the time . . . .

Wish I had wit!

A Hogswatch Carol

Twas the night before Hogswatch… and an unquiet spirit was loose on the streets of Ankh Morpork.

this is … scumble? asked Corporal Nobbs.
Mmmm. Made from apples. (hic). Mostly apples…. Nanny Ogg staggered slightly on the frosty cobbles. Her homemade scumble was an effective de-icer, but…
sets your ears a-light, dunnit. Nanny Ogg sighed, grabbed a handful of snow, and extinguished the halo of pale blue flames circling the rim of Nobby Nobb’s helmet.
No smoking, Corporal Nobbs. I did tell you before. But you’re a good watchm… watchperso… watchmember to walk an old woman back to her lodging on a dark night.
Jus doin’ my duty, on a nasty night, ma’am.

The pair continued an erratic progress through the dark streets, punctuated by the occasional slip, stagger, slurp, and verses of The Hedgehog Song. As they passed a dark alley entrance, an even darker shadow detached itself from the wall.
HAPPY HOGSWATCH, GYTHA OGG
Nanny Ogg peered into bright blue sparks set deep in white bone sockets. One of the talents of Lancre witch is the ability to sober up in a hurry, or maybe to not actually be as drunk as she appears. Certainly, the return gaze that looked into the eyes of Death was focussed and clear.
Not one of your busier nights, I imagine
JUST A MATCHGIRL, AND A FROZEN PEASANT IN THE WOODS - THE USUAL HOGSWATCH TRAGEDIES
So what brings you here? Nanny Ogg’s eyes dropped to the skeletal hand of Death, where a broken lifetimer was clasped in a bony grip. The glass was broken, but the name Jacob Marley could be read etched into the remaining bulb. This would not be unusual, but the thin swirling mist that filled the lifetimer was. The mist was constrained by the hourglass shape, and moved slowly from bulb to bulb.
A ghost?
SOMEONE IS INTERFERING. I NEED TO KNOW WHO
Jacob Marley?
HE DIED. I DONT KNOW ANY MORE, YET. BUT STAY ALERT. STRANGE THINGS MAY BE ABOUT TO OCCUR THIS HOGSWATCH NIGHT, GYTHA OGG
Death turned, and strode back into the alley, vanishing into the dark. Nanny Ogg looked back to Corporal Nobbs, who was attempting to arrest a lamp post for obstruction. She sighed. Her accurately thrown snowball sizzled as it cooled the helmet back down, and put out the ring of blue flame.

Susan Sto-Helit glared at her hair in the mirror. The hair did not glare back - Susan’s hair did not have eyes. But it did manage to communicate an air of contempt for the attempts to restrain it in some semblance of order. Susan did not get on with her hair, and the feeling was pretty mutual…

Si

by Chuck Palahniuk

It’s too dark to read the headstone.

“We’re not really going to be buried, you know.”

Little bits of dirt from a fresh grave are grinding into my face. The chain attached to the cuffs clanks dully as I yank on it in a futile attempt to reach just a bit farther.

“We’re going to be martyrs. We’re going to live for fucking ever.”

Even without reading it, I know the name on the stone is mine.

Assuming someone puts them on properly, ratcheted down so that they compress the bones of your wrists a bit, you can only get out of metal cuffs two ways: with a key, or by breaking or cutting the bones at the base of your thumb and wiggling out.

The hardened stainless steel alloy they make cuffs out of is too tough to cut with a hacksaw in any reasonable amount of time. In about ten minutes, this shitty little graveyard is going to be buried in rubble.

I rest, panting, for a few seconds. Tyler, I say, you’re thinking of Wahabbists.

Mash up mothballs in a mortar, mix in corn syrup, keeping a 2 to 1 ratio of mothballs to syrup. Slowly add motor oil while stirring with a glass rod in a glass bowl until the mixture is the consistency of Play-Dough. Do this in an ice bath. The naphthalene from the mothballs combines with the fructose in the corn syrup to form an explosive. The motor oil is just a solvent.

I know this because Marley knows this.

I usually carry a handcuff key taped to the inside of my belt in the back, where I can get to it if I need it.

Unfortunately, my key is currently several inches out of my reach.

I’m not quite willing to resort to the second method of getting out of competently applied handcuffs. Yet.

Add paraffin to the mix and you get plastique. At this point it’s relatively stable, as long as you don’t put it under compression. That means you need to be careful to wipe the threads before you screw the cap on if you’re making pipe bombs.

Some people like to use a simple delayed-burn timer built from a cigarette and a fuse from Fourth of July fireworks. You can also set it off with a kitchen timer wired to a rocket motor you can get from most hobby stores. Fuses have never, ever worked for me.

I snort out snotty clumps of funerary dirt and ignore Marley, stretching. Maybe if I partially dislocate my shoulder I can get a little more reach.

Put enough plastique put in the right place and you can level a skyscraper.

I am the ghost of Christmas Yet to Come.

Peter Blatty’s A CHRISTMAS CAROL

“I am the spirit of your former partner, Father Marley, now doomed to wonder in limbo for all time, and I have come to tell you of visitationst that await…”

FATHER MERRIN (tossing holy water with one hand and wielding a crucifix with the other): Be gone from this place! Into hell with you and leave me in peace! The power of Christ compels you!

FATHER MARLEY’S GHOST Aaaahhhhhhhh! It burrrrrrns!

And Father Merrin slept soundly the rest of the night.
[The End]

Wish I had the energy and time for BUFFY- I think Spike would be a great Ebeneezer and you’ve got well over a century to work with in flashbacks.

One large helping of Longfellow coming right up…

You shall hear how Scrooge the miser,
How black-hearted Ebenezer,
He the grasping moneylender,
He, sharp-witted man of business,
Learned to keep his Christmas rightly,
Learned to please its mighty Spirits,
Learned the meaning of compassion
And for fellow-men the caring.

Dead was Marley, to begin with,
Dead as iron nail of coffin,
Laid below in his own coffin
And in grave for seven years.
Scrooge, his sole surviving partner,
Owned the business yet, and prospered,
Mounding high the golden coinage
Though enjoying not a penny;
For to get and keep was money
In the mind of Scrooge the miser,
Not for frittering on comforts,
Not for luxuries enjoying.
Not a coin gave he to beggars,
Not though they were cold and starving
And in want of common comforts:
Not indeed if they were dying -
There were prisons and poorhouses,
And for those who would not go there
Would they die, then better do it
And decrease the population,
E’en the surplus population.
Not a penny Ebenezer
Gave unto the carol-singers,
Those who sing the Christmas carols
At the doorways in December;
Not a penny to his nephew
Who alone was his relation -
Nor would even dine at table
With young Frederick his nephew
But in Hell would see him sooner,
Calling Christmas but a humbug -
And to Cratchit, his employee,
Bob, his clerk - pen-pusher, filer -
Paid but fifteen shillings weekly
With the which to feed his children,
Feed and house his wife and children,
For his tireless hours of labour
In his chilly fireless office,
And then grudgingly allowed him
But the single day at Christmas
Thinking it a grave injustice
That he could not stop his wages.

So upon the eve of Christmas
On a foggy, frosty even,
Sending Cratchit to his home-hearth
To his loving wife and children,
Scrooge his little dinner taking
In an inexpensive tavern
Hurried home, the dark not minding
(Dark was cheap), and turned the doorknob
Seeing - or was it a humbug,
Or the face of Jacob Marley
On the door’s own iron knocker?
Grousing “Humbug!”, Ebenezer
Took himself up stairs - ghost-haunted? -
And within his chilly chamber
Straight composed himself for slumber
In his nightshirt and his bed-cap
With a meagre bowl of supper;
When upon the dreadful instant
Came a fearsome clash and clangour
And within the mean apartment
There stood Marley’s ghost translucent
Death’s own carrion-stench exuding
Wound around with chains and coffers.
Scrooge’s “Humbug!” died a-borning,
On his lips and tongue a-borning:
Marley’s horror quite forbade it
And would give no leave denial;
Scrooge, though no whit superstitious
Could not but admit that Marley
Stood in shadish form before him,
Nor could he his ear deny him.

Jacob Marley - once his partner,
And at very least his equal,
Quite as greedy, quite as grasping,
Quite as sound a head for business -
Now condemned to doom eternal,
Doomed to walk the world for ever
With the chains of his own forging,
Chains of greed and chains of grasping
Burdensome a-clank behind him
For his fellow-man neglecting
And his want of kind compassion
Told his friend, old Ebenezer
That the same fate was awaiting;
But this one chance Scrooge was granted,
To be visited by Spirits,
Christmas Present, Past and Future
And attending to their lessons;
Or would Marley’s fate attend him
And, condemned to walk for ever
In a world of want and sorrow
Powerless to help or comfort,
Scrooge would reap as he had sowed.
Thus, to his own place reverting,
Jacob Marley’s shade departed
And poor Scrooge was left to ponder
And await the Christmas Spirits.

Christmas Past burned like a candle
And he bore a candle-snuffer;
And he took the cringing miser,
By the very hand he took him,
Back to when he was a schoolboy
And in schoolhouse sat neglected
While his schoolmates all a-homewards
Went their Christmas carols singing;
With his own imagination
And the characters from stories -
Stories all of brave adventure,
Robin Hood and Ali Baba,
Robin Crusoe and Man Friday -
As his only boon-companions;
Till upon a later Christmas
Scrooge’s sister, little Fanny,
Came to bring him home to Father,
Father grown again congenial
Until Fanny dared to wheedle
And implore that Ebenezer
Should come home again for Christmas;
Never more to school returning
But to man’s estate attaining -
O, a gentle heart had Fanny;
Gentle heart and sickly body
Though she died a married woman,
Died a wife and died a mother,
And her child… now Ebenezer
Bowed his head and thought in sorrow
Of the nephew he rejected
And consigned unto Perdition.

  • Then in counting-house apprenticed,
    Scrooge, to Fezziweg apprenticed,
    Made a Christmas party joyous
    With his friend and kindly master;
    Though it cost but little money
    Making joy and making merry,
    Scrooge informed the Spirit crossly
    That the question was not money
    But the master’s gen’rous spirit
    Which to all his poor employees
    Made their working days more joyful,
    Made their daily burden lighter…
    And again his brow was darkened,
    Scrooge, his thought to Cratchit turning,
    Wished a word or two in private,
    Wished his clerk were there to hear it.
    Still a youth, with his fiancee,
    Now to Scrooge his ring returning,
    For, though he his word had given
    And had never sought to break it,
    Yet she knew 'twas Gold he loved now
    And would keep his word for duty
    Not for love; and joyless marriage
    Was a thing that she desired not,
    So she freed him from his promise
    And to his new mistress left him.
    “No more, Spirit!” Scrooge demanded,
    But there yet was one more Christmas,
    Christmas Past, but still more recent;
    Belle, his love, a wife and mother
    Loving, and loved by, her children
    As might have been his own children…
    This was all beyond enduring;
    Maddened, seizing on the snuffer,
    Scrooge applied it to the Spirit,
    Christmas Past, who, unresisting,
    Let his flame be quite extinguished
    Leaving Scrooge to Christmas Present.
    Light and sound soon Scrooge alerted
    To the presence of the Spirit:
    Christmas Present, like a giant
    Robed in green, and open-handed,
    Spilling Christmas feasts uncounted,
    Fruit and nuts and every sweetmeat,
    Goose and turkey, beef and pork meat,
    Pies and puddings, wine and brandy,
    All that cheers the Christmas table;
    And he bade poor Ebenezer
    (Willing, now, his lesson learning,
    Humbly to the Spirit listing)
    Come and see the Christmas season,
    Come and see it in its glory.

All about the streets were shoppers,
Christmas treats and presents buying;
Toys and trinkets, gay and sparkly,
Wrapped in rustling crimson paper,
Tied with string and waxy-sealed;
And their Christmas fare preparing,
Bringing roasts home from the bakers’,
Roasted goose and roasted turkey,
Roasted beef and roasted mutton;
Thus to set the board for Christmas,
Mayor and parson, judge and tailor,
All prepared for merry making
And upon each Christmas dinner
From his torch a Christmas blessing
Cast the Ghost of Christmas Present
Sending joy on rich and poor man,
But on poor the richer blessing
Where it was most keenly needed.
Here indeed was poor Bob Crachit,
With his wife, his daughter Martha
(On her day off from the hat-shop),
And his several other children -
Least of all was Tim the tiny,
On his leg a cast of iron,
On his little crutch a-hobble
Yet of heart and spirit mighty.
Does he ail? and will he live?
So old Scrooge implored the Spirit.
I the last, if Fate unaltered,
Of my kind to see him here.
What of it? rejoined the Spirit.
Will he die? Then better do it,
And reduce the population…
Scrooge in shame, his own words quoted,
Heard the Spirit thus rebuke him:
O, the surplus population?
Man, that wicked cant propounding,
Think yourself not full of wisdom
Who should die and who should die not;
Thou art dust unto the Spirits
And may be of less deserving
Than thou thinkest… but the Cratchits
Were prepared to sit at table
And they dined on goose and stuffing
And on mounds of mashed potato
And on gravy hot and tasty
And on Mrs Cratchit’s pudding
Until all were filled and sated
And on punch of gin and lemon,
Hot, with sugar well compounded,
Drank their Christmas toasts; Bob, loyal,
Drank the first to his employer,
Though his wife’s kind face was scornful
And - only but that it was Christmas -
Would have little speech of kindness
For the man who used her husband,
Used him long and used him cruelly
Paying him starvation wages!
Doing this unpleasant duty
Chilled the cheer for five full minutes;
Yet the Christmas cheer recovered,
And the merry Cratchit family
Thought themselves of happier subjects,
Toasted those they loved more kindly
Wishing Christmas joy and fortune.
As for Scrooge, the Spirit led him
To another Christmas dinner,
And another, and another;
On a ship or on a lighthouse,
In a little mining village,
In a prison or a workhouse,
Christmas dinners mean and lowly
Where the Spirit gave his blessing
And each man turned to his neighbour
In a kinder, better spirit.
Then to Scrooge’s nephew, Frederick,
Where the company was hearty;
Where the absence of the uncle
Could the nephew not dishearten
And around the dinner-table
“Humbug” was a cause for jesting;
All the guests a grand joke thought it,
Thought of Scrooge with kindly pity,
For their Christmas-time was merry
And he had no power to hurt it;
Only he that was the poorer,
Only he that lost his dinner,
Only he that missed the gaming
And the music and the laughter.
Scrooge well marked it - marked the gaming -
E’en began to guess the riddles:
Guessed them well and guessed them often
(Stubborn Scrooge was, but no lackwit),
Watched the jolly game of blindmen,
Swore amain that Topper cheated,
Watched him with the plumptious sister,
Watched him press a ring upon her.

Then at length the Spirit faded;
One alone his day of glory,
Waned at last his final hour:
And he gave old Scrooge a warning.
'Neath his cloak two starveling children,
Want and Ignorance he named them,
Spelled for Man a dreadful future
Were they tended not all timely
And, his final warning hanging,
Vanished Christmas Present’s Spirit
Leaving Scrooge alone and waiting
For the Ghost of Christmas Future.

Last it came, a brooding spectre.
Robed in black it was, and hooded;
Naught to see but hand and finger;
Naught it spoke to Scrooge, but beckoned.
Scrooge, three parts repentant, heeded;
Followed close the Spirit’s leading;
Heard a grimly conversation
'Mongst some men of business, touching
On the death of one known to them,
Gone, they said, straight to the Devil
(Said it heedless of respecting;
Said it griefless and urbanely).
Him they mourned not much together;
Barely cared for his interring,
Swiftly onto other matters
Moved, and went their way uncaring.
Then, where streets grew close and narrow,
Where the filth was and corruption
Was a rag and bone purveyor
Gleeful, wicked - quite amoral -
Three his clients were a-calling,
From the same place lately coming:
Char and nurse and undertaker
Their late charge’s corpse all plundered,
Stole his smallest precious trinket
Stole his funereal vestment
Stole his curtains and his bedding
Sold it all unto the rag-man
For a petty tale of shillings.
Ebenezer Scrooge well saw it:
How a man might well be treated,
Little caring - little cared for -
Held contemptuous in passing;
Earning love of friend nor neighbour,
Mourned by none, by none respected.
Beckoned once more by the Spirit
Scrooge now saw the death-bed,
But he could not bear to see it -
Not the face of the departed!
Did some instinct eldritch warn him?
Begging mercy of the Spirit
Ebenezer asked if no-one
Felt one kindly thought about him,
This poor corpse beneath the blanket
And the Spirit took him straightway
To the home of two poor debtors
Where the husband told his helpmate
That their troubles were abated:
Had their creditor relented?

  • He was dead, and past relenting.
    And the woman blessed her Maker
    (Though repenting, on the instant)
    For that death had saved their fortunes
    And they would not now be ruined.
    But this gave to Scrooge no comfort,
    And he begged afresh the Spirit
    To a better vision grant him
    Where some death was marked by sorrow,
    Tenderness for the departed!
    So to Cratchit’s home the Spirit
    Bore the fainting Ebenezer:
    Tiny Tim lay cold and lifeless,
    Bob and family were mourning
    Yet their grief was not untempered
    For by love of Tim united
    They’d be ever after better
    Thus his memory to honour.
    Too late for the child grieving
    Scrooge was taken to a graveyard
    Where the Spirit showed him lastly
    There his dreadful grave-inscription.
    Scrooge was dead, for all his money,
    All his scrimping and his saving,
    All his thrift and all his getting;
    Dead, unmourned, unblessed, and friendless,
    Quite unmissed by any mortal.
    Then in tears fell Scrooge a-kneeling,
    Shamelessly implored the Spirit
    That this Future was not “Shall be”;
    That it might be “May be” only;
    That his fate might be averted
    By a hearty, true repentance;
    That, his Christmas lessons learning
    From the wise and mighty Spirits
    Scrooge might live all year in Christmas
    And the whole year round be Christmas
    Keeping, of all men, such Christmas
    As would make him ever better,
    Ever kinder to his neighbour,
    Treating all as friend and neighbour
    If one chance be only granted
    And these dreams be not a torment.
    Then, the Spirit’s knees a-clutching,
    On his own knees bowing begging,
    Scrooge beheld the Spirit vanish,
    Ghost of Christmas Future vanish…
    Dwindle down into a bedpost
    Which poor Scrooge awoke still clutching
    On a bright and sunny morning!

Gone the fog, and clear and frosty
Was the sunny blue-skied morning;
All outside was clash and clangour
Of the morning bells in chorus.
Then Scrooge scurried to the window,
Flung it wide, and in the courtyard
There espied a scruffy boy-child
And the day from him demanded.
“Why, 'tis CHRISTMAS DAY!” the boy-child
All incredulous responded,
And, rejoicing, Ebenezer
Realized he had not missed it.
Straightaway demands a Turkey -
Fat, enormous Christmas Turkey,
Prizes winning, big as boy-child -
Sends to Bob as Christmas present,
Laughing pays the poultry-seller,
Laughing pays the boy for fetching,
Laughing pays the cab to Camden,
To the home of Robert Cratchit
With no word of who had sent it
Thus to feast the Cratchit family
As they never had been feasted.
Dressed, abroad goes Scrooge that morning,
Giving coin to needy beggars,
Goes to church to sing his carols,
Laughs for joy of Christmas morning,
Then to Frederick’s home wending,
Meek of face, apologising
For his rudeness and his crassness,
Asks if he might stay for dinner.
Joyous nephew seats his Uncle -
Late, but not too late, repenting -
In the favoured seat of honour,
Serves old Scrooge the choicest portion,
Makes him welcome at the table,
In the music and the jesting,
In the games and entertainment,
In the bosom of his family.

Full of mischief, Ebenezer
Goes next day unto his office
Plays a prank upon Bob Cratchit
Catches him arriving tardy,
Late by fully eighteen minutes
(Gorged, no doubt, on too much Turkey,
Making merry with his neighbours,
Far and wide dispensing Turkey,
Drinking deep and none too wisely).
Scrooge pretends that he will fire him,
Or at least reduce his wages,
But the bluff is too much for him
And the laughter is his master;
Tells poor Bob, through tears of laughter,
How his meaner days are over;
How he will reward Bob Cratchit
As his clerk deserves so richly,
And his family help moreover -
This, when morning’s work is over,
They’ll discuss with Christmas toasting
And with ale all warmed and spicy -
Christmas bowl of smoking Bishop.
Meanwhile, ere he dip his quill-pen,
Bob shall build the fires higher
And a new coal-bucket purchase
Straightway in the market purchase
That their Boxing Day be merry.

Thus the grasping Ebenezer,
Thus the greedy moneygrubber,
Thus flint-hearted Scrooge the broker
Learned at last his Christmas lesson,
Learned it from the Christmas Spirits,
Christmas Present, Past and Future,
And for all his life he kept it,
Lived his Christmas as he promised.
And to Tiny Tim a father -
Yes, in truth, a second father -
Scrooge became his very saviour,
For by better care and doctors,
Better food and better physic,
Tiny Tim was kept from dying,
Grew in stature and in vigour.
Nor, in all the town of London,
Nor, in all the bustling city
Kept there any man his Christmas
Half so well as Scrooge could keep it.
Thus his name became a byword
And a jest among the people,
And if Scrooge were cause for laughter
Little heeded he the jesting

  • None could laugh as well as he could;
    Late the laugh, but twice abundant!

Thus our Christmas Carol ending,
Tiny Tim our prayers a-leading
Bids our Maker bless us richly,
And God bless us each and every!

Bravo Malacandra, Bravo!

Could you please try your hand at Tolkien now? It was beyond my meager skill.