Incident in Hamburg: The Thread

I’m beginning work on a novel entitled Incident in Hamburg and I’ve decided to create a megathread for critique and research help. Here’s my rough summary of the novel:

Incident in Hamburg Outline

Setting: Spring/Summer; Hamburg, Federal Republic of Germany

Characters: Hans Zilger-Professor of History at the University of Hamburg, President of the Spenglerian Society, 48

Johann Gratz-Psychologist, Hohenzollern Restorationist, Vice-President of the Spenglerian Society, 35

Liselott Stolz-Staff member of Der Spiegel, member of Spenglerian Society, 43

Elizabeth “Lili” Jareb-Instructor of Mathematics at Wilhelm-Gymnasium, member of Spenglerian Society, 26

Herman Neidhoefer-Graduate Student at University of Hamburg, Member of Spenglerian Society, 24

Rudolf Yavuz-Prosecutor, 37

Martin Schulze-GSG 9 investigator, 53

Summary: The Spenglerian Society is an organization that discusses Oswald Spengler’s historical theories, how it has played so far, and how it will play out but also in addition various aspects of German high culture. The members meet on Wednesday night discussing certain recent events. Herman implies to Johann and Liselott that Hans and Lili are lovers despite various factors which would make it otherwise. Liselott offers to take the Society members to a dinner at an expensive restaurant on Friday. That Friday a bombing takes place near the restaurant killing and wounding several people including a member of the Bundestang. Johann attempts to create a monarchist party known as the Union Party which gets him into contact with reactionaries including neo-Nazis. More bombings take place in Berlin, Hamburg, and elsewhere killing almost a hundred. The Chancellor (a weak Social Democrat) fails to act decisively and loses legitimacy. Herman develops a complex theory that radical members of the Leftist Party are behind the bombings and passes on the information to Martin, his father’s friend and one of the investigators in the attacks. However Islamic terrorists are suspected but than suspicion moves onto neo-Nazis and Johann gets implicated amongst them. The Spenglerian Society forms an elaborate plan to keep Western culture alive while continuing efforts to investigate the bombings. Herman’s analysis further implicates a Bundestang member as among the culprits. Liselott gets the accusation published by Der Spiegel which causes protests, boycotts, and general unpleasantness. Martin however begins a relentless investigation which proves Herman’s theories but lacks concrete evidence. Johann however uses elaborate psychological techniques which drives two accomplices to confess. The Social Democrat-Green-Left coalition collapses prosecuted by the relentless Rudolf Yavuz who along with Johann plan to be elected to the Bundestang.

I’d like resources on the following (in English):

Hamburg
University of Hamburg
Restaurants, nightlife in Hamburg
German politics
German law enforcement
German legal system
German monarchists/Hohenzollern resotrationists
German academia

Maybe a nitpick, but I’m pretty sure it’s Bundestag with no “n”.

No novel set in Hamburg would be complete without at least a mention of the Reeperbahn.

Perhaps some East German/Stasi involvement in some way?

Dear Curtis LeMay—Wow, what a great coincidence…

As luck would have it, I am actually flying over to Hamburg next week (a business trip, but I will hopefully get a bit of sightseeing in as well) and as I have always admired your sincerity, your genuine, curious nature, and your great contributions to SDMB, I would like to take this opportunity to invite you to fly over with me, so you can research Hamburg in person and hopefully flesh out some of the subjects you will need to become familiar with to make “Incident In Hamburg” a success.

I realise that at your age it would not be appropriate for you to travel alone internationally with a stranger, so I am also going to invite your parents (and any brothers and sisters you may have) to come along as well, to make this a LeMay family vacation that you all will be able to look back fondly on for many years to come. I have a lot of frequent flier miles to use up, so if you also want to invite a friend or two to come along, please feel free.

I will need to know how many rooms to book, (if it’s agreeable to you and your family we will all be staying at the Swissotel on Widenstrasse, near the harbor, which is a very nice property) and how much spending money you think you will need (Hamburg is fairly expensive, so I would hate for you to run short during your research) so I can get all the necessary details in order.

This will be an exciting visit to be sure, and what an honor it will be for me to help make “Incident In Hamburg” a reality…

Please PM me as soon as possible so I can get your flights taken care of today, and you can have your father call me so I can wire him any money he may need in advance for incidentals.

Auf Wiedersehen, Matthew

I am delighted and amazed by your offer, MLB but I’m afraid I don’t think I’ll be able to make it.

For one I currently do not have a passport so it will take a couple of weeks for it to be made and processed. In addition I have several volunteering commitments here. :frowning:

native German here

in Winnipeg is right - ‘Bundestag’ is the correct spelling

you should also change ‘Liselott Stolz’ to ‘Liselotte’ - i’ve never seen this name without the ‘e’ at the end

Unimportant trivia, to bne sure, but when I changed trains in Hamburg in early June, 1965 I noticed right away the overwhelming smell of beer in the station. I never noticed this at any other German bahnhof. Small details such as this can give a lot of reality to a story.

Here’s the prologue with some of the ideas offered by others incorporated:

rologue: Underneath the Lantern
It was a fine March night as Herman Neidhoefer said hurriedly to his companions: “Got to go to Herr Zilger’s!” and ran through the streets in pursuit of a taxi. However a few blocks down on a rather lonely street he noticed two people standing underneath a lantern in some sort of a romantic encounter. Immediately thinking of that immortal song, Neidhoefer steadily got closer for a better look while remaining unnoticed. As he looked closer he thought the tall man looked familiar. It took a minute or two before it registered with that unmistakable brown hair, and the gray and humourous eyes it was his history professor Hans Zilger.
As Herman recovered from the shock of his professor being a passionate lover he wondered-who was the other? Herr Zilger was not married nor had ever been but Herman was pretty sure he was not homosexual or bisexual. That idea proved correct as Herman confirmed the other was a woman. She had long dark hair, a rather large nose, was wearing spectacles and was also about half the age of his professor. Looks Eastern European-Hungarian perhaps or Greek possibly with Jewish admixture- for that matter she does remind me of an intellectual version of Lena thought Herman.

Herman couldn’t hear what they were saying but he could see what was happening-presently the professor and the lady had locked their lips together. Our dear professor seems to have finally gotten himself a girlfriend and a rather attractive one at that Herman smiled to himself-a sympathetic smile and quickened his pace as he spotted a taxi.

Johann Gratz smoked a cigar as he checked his gigantic portrait of Otto von Bismarck for any blemishes and stains. He did the same for small, autographed photographs of Hindenburg and Ludendorff and also a flag of the German Empire from a Jaeger unit at the Battle of Tannenberg. Finally he examined the collection of the Imperial weapons and memorabilia. He turned on the radio and immediately heard Lena’s “Satellite” blearing out before Johann turned the station to a one playing a symphony by Mozart.
Damn modern rubbish Gratz thought as he helped himself to a pastry and read a bit of a psychological journal before he noticed the watch and got up.Many thought him a neo-Nazi or insane for his monarchist tendencies and nostalgia for the old German Empire of the Hohenzollern Dynasty. Especially suspect was his overwhelming preference for the Imperial flag over the current one of the Federal Republic-the former which had become suspect itself due to its use by the DVU. Johann thought all this panic about him nonsense.
Going into his BMW FO1 Johann turned on the radio to discover to his disappointment the Mozart symphony was over to be replaced by a piece by Tchaikovsky. He decided to listen to some news instead and after some reports of the war in Afghanistan groaned loudly as the voice of the Chancellor came on. That damned idiot again? My God! He had already been horrified when he heard that the Social Democrats had won the largest number of seats in the Bundestag but even more when they formed a coalition with the Greens and the Left. Even worse, the current Chancellor was a virtual nonentity and had easily been the most radical German government.

Presently Johann’s cellphone rang and he answered “Who is this?”
“This is Hans-are you coming today?”
“Yes-I’m leaving right now.”
“Well we have a new member joining today.”
“That’s nice to hear. See you there.”
As he got on the autobahn Johann felt he could not hear the news anymore and groaning changed the station back and to his delight found that they were playing a piece by Wagner.

Liselotte Stolz was hurriedly packing up her stuff in the offices of the Der Spiegel. The chief editor of the periodical, Georg Manstein lit a cigarette as he studied Liselotte. Fine lady, the best on the staff- wonder why she never married though… Manstein coughed slightly and then hesitated a bit as he prepared to speak.
“Liselotte?” he began
“Yes, Georg?” she asked
“I don’t mean to enquire into your personal life but…”
Liselotte said rather kindly “Oh, Georg, you know better than to blubber like that with bullshit. As for your question, I haven’t ever married nor have had a lover-either a man or a woman. I’m just not interested.”
“Umm…then who’s that man who picks you up on some nights? You said you didn’t have any siblings.”
“Oh. That’s my friend-just a friend-Johann Gratz. He takes me to meetings of the Spenglerian Society.”
“Spenglerian-as in the historian Oswald Spengler?”
“Yes, we discuss his theories and their application to reality.”
“Hmm…I’ve always been meaning to read his works. Do you have a copy?”
“Yes-I’ll give it to you tomorrow. By the way, is Alicia going to interview Muller tomorrow?”
“The schedule got confirmed yesterday. I can’t stand that son-of-a-bitch Muller though. I’m a Social Democrat myself but it disgusts me how the Chancellor is so spineless in giving into the demands of the Left Party and especially that Muller-the former Stasi bastard. Maybe I’ll vote FDP next time.”
“Good for you” Liselotte replied as her phone rang, than she said “Oh, hello? Yes-I’ll be right down. Georg, I’ll be going. Have a good night.”
Liselotte went down the elevator and saw Johann’s BMW parked right by. Johann was standing outside, readjusting his spectacles.
“Fine day?”
“Yes, although Georg seems to be thinking I’m your lover.”
“Ha-ha” laughed Johann in an archaic, aristocratic manner, “Let’s get going. We have a new member today.”

Far away in Berlin, in a luxurious apartment not far from Potsdamer Platz a certain conference was in process.

A man said sarcastically “Welcome to Berlin. Now take a cigar if you’d like.”
Five of the individuals did so-two did not. The first man treated one for himself as he also got out a stack of documents.
“So everything’s ready now-the target, the equipment, the men?”
“Yes, we’ve confirmed,” the second man said now with a sneer “that Herr Lapp we’ll be going there on Friday. He will happen to get more than just some excellent Indian cuisine.”
“Also, are the plans for Stage 2 ready?”
“Yes, our men are scouring for places in Berlin, Hamburg, Munich, Frankfurt, Cologne, Dusseldorf, and elsewhere.”
“Good-they once said we were discredited and an extinct species. Now we shall see our triumph.”