I’m writing a short story and have found myself stuck on a particular detail. Naturally, I thought immediately of tapping into the massive wealth of brilliance floating around this place like the pollen that is currently settling on my car, rendering its once pearly black surface a dull yellow. But I digress.
At one point in this story, the antagonist seeks to kidnap a young fellow for financial gain. I’ve gotten them into a place where they’re rather secluded, and the young guy doesn’t know the evil man is around. The unseemly man withdraws from his coat pocket a flask and a rag, douses it with the fluid in the flask, holds it over the young guy’s mouth and nose, and renders him unconscious. Yes, I know it’s a bit trite, but the story is supposed to read as though it’s a concept for one of those old, overacted radio shows. You know, all Sam Spade kitschy, the kind of thing you visualize in black and white.
The stuff in the flask and the rag over the face is what I’m concerned about. I’m stuck on using that particular device for two reasons: one, the imagery it conjures up really captures the feeling I’m trying to create, at least in my mind; and two, it does our evil guy no good to cause serious physical harm to his subject, so a blackjack to the back of the head is right out. However, I’ve really got no idea how the whole rag thing would realistically play out.
First, the fluid in the flask. I think it would be most appropriate for it to be either chloroform or ether. Earlier in the story, there is a lengthy bit detailing how meticulous the antagonist is about setting the whole thing up to be foolproof and how well his tracks are covered. Given that, I am not comfortable just saying that he “got ether/chloroform.” I’ve never tried to purchase either of these myself, so my first question is this: how easy or difficult would it be for your average person with no extraordinary connections or financial means to procure either substance? I’d love to know specifically how one would have gone about getting either one in the late 20’s, as that fits the time frame of my story, but that seems a very esoteric question to ask and so I’m happy to hear any sort of information you may have. Alternatively, if it wasn’t readily available, would it have been possible for a person to make either ether or chloroform at home?
Secondly, and perhaps this should have gone firstly, but which choice would be most appropriate? Specifically, which would render the young guy unconscious fastest and for the longest period? Which would be most effective in the dosage provided by a flask and a rag? And which would be the safest in the short- (and to satisfy my own curiosity, long-) term?
If there’s an alternative I’m missing, feel free to speak up. I am looking for some sort of device that will allow our antagonist to render his subject unconscious for thirty minutes to an hour, although repeated applications of the device aren’t out of the question. I really do like the old-timey imagery of the rag over the mouth, but I am very much open to suggestions.