You also need to work some reference to God or praying in there if you hope to be taken seriously as a candidate for public office. Invoking a mythological, unseen, and omnipotent being with a temper like a three-year-old on a Pixie Stix bender is the best way to show your compassion and connection to the reality.
I’m familiar with what happened. She appeared for (I believe) 3 fundraisers, as expressly allowed by the agreement that was signed. Obama also appeared in Florida for some fundraisers.
I have no issue with her choice on the Michigan situation.