A few weeks ago I asked for a critique of a job wanted post that I was going to put up on Craigslist. Apparently it was pretty awful. So I took peoples advice and came up with something that should be a lot better. What is your opinion of me posting this? (This is in Oregon)
Do you need someone to replace bad computer hardware or install new hardware? Do you need someone to troubleshoot software? I have experience and am A+ certified.
Do you need a network technician to assist engineers working with LAN or WAN networks? I have an Associate’s degree in network technology and I have my CCNA certification.
I love working with computers, networking equipment, and other computer peripherals. I am a very fast learner, take direction well, and love solving problems. So if you need an entry level IT person then I am perfect for the job. Just reply to this post and I will E-mail you my resume and cover-letter.
I live in Dallas but am willing to work as far as Portland or the Portland metro area. Thank you for your time and consideration.
So, is that positive enough? Do I do a good job of selling myself?