Some suggestions
Networking (wired or wireless) - Allow for shared applications and multiple computers to connect to the internet, we can also help configure gaming systems like XBOX, Playstation, and Nintendo Wii for network access We can also enable peripheral and folder sharing within your home network so everyone can access common files or printers. (1 to 2 hours)
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Networking (wired or wireless) - We allow for shared applications and multiple computers to connect to the internet. We can help configure gaming systems like XBOX, Playstation, and Nintendo Wii for network access. We can enable peripheral and folder sharing within your home network so everyone can access common files or printers. (1 to 2 hours)
Virus/Spyware cleanup - Don’t want to haul your system to the shop, one of our technicians can take care of it at your home or office (1.5 to 3.5 hours)
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Virus/Spyware cleanup - Don’t want to haul your system to the shop? One of our technicians can take care of it at your home or office (1.5 to 3.5 hours)
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Virus/Spyware cleanup - If you don’t want to haul your system to the shop, one of our technicians can take care of it at your home or office (1.5 to 3.5 hours)
A real nitpick but you screwed up some underlinings: If you look at the headings for Broadband Setup and After Hours/Weekends/Holdidays, you’ll see you extended the underlining past the hyphen instead of cutting it off at the end of the heading.
After Hours/Weekends/Holdidays - We regular hours, we have onsite technicians available 24 hours a day, additional charges do apply to same day service calls under some circumstances.
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We are open regular hours and also have onsite technicians available 24 hours a day. Additional charges may apply to same day service calls under some circumstances.
Concerned about cost, Bring it into our shop where the costs are lower. Some issues are also not as feasible onsite and can be better handled by the additional tools and facilities the shop can provide.
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Concerned about cost? Bring it into our shop where the rates are lower. Some issues are also not as feasible for onsite work and can be better handled by the additional tools and facilities the shop can provide.
Its a major project to get to them
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It’s a major project to get to them
Memory Upgrades are always free installation with a puchase of our memory!
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Memory Upgrades are always installed free with a purchase of our memory!
The section on Malwarebytes Anti-Malware is confusing. Did you copy it from a Malwarebytes’ site? You mention “our advanced heuristic scanning technology” and “we have implemented a threats center” which presumedly refers to Malwarebytes not PC Search & Rescue.
Ever wanted to be your own web designer. Wix has some of the best tools we have ever seen to allow even a novice developer to build and host professional looking sites in a matter of hours.
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Ever wanted to be your own web designer? Wix has some of the best tools we have ever seen that allow even a novice developer to build and host professional looking sites in a matter of hours.
You can leave messages 24 hours a day at the main dispatch line, on call techs do check those messages from time to time.
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You can leave messages 24 hours a day at the main dispatch line, on call techs check those messages regularly.
I notice your coupons have no expiration dates. It’s usually a bad idea to make them open-ended like that.