Somewhat inspired by the fictional businesses in the real world thread earlier…
A casual acquaintance is writing a book and has asked me to edit his manuscript. It’s atrocious. Aside from the hackneyed plot and horrendous grammar, there are tons of references to real world companies and celebrities. He doens’t miss an opportunity to drop a name. The main character works at Verizon, has a girlfriend who’s a party planner for Versace, meets Paris Hilton at Bungalow 8 etc. He also liberally uses entire song choruses to describe the protagonist’s state of mind. I’m not a professional editor by any means - just a halfway decent speller - but I’m wondering if it’s ok for him to use these celebs and business in a book that might get published, or whether or not he needs to have characters who work at Berizon and meet Claris Kilton. I doubt anyone other than his mother will buy this book, but I don’t want Verizon cutting of my phone service just in case.