Review my short story

Send it over to me at <myusername>@gmail.com

Email me with it please. :wink:

I just sent you a review via email as my comments were a bit too copious to put here. Email me if you have any problems viewing it.

Thanks for your feedback, I don’t have the time to do justice to the depth of your response right now, but I’ll try and email you with a more detailed response this evening.