Anyone want to give me some feedback on a sci-fi short story I wrote awhile back?

First off, it’s written in a classic “space opera” style with slight twists of humor, so if that’s not your bag you definitely won’t like it.

My wife and I were arguing yesterday about when I wrote this but I think we settled on sometime between 1 and 2 years ago. I just found it on my computer the other day and realized I kind of like it (rare for me to think that of something I wrote so long ago.)

It’s not quite finished, but you’ll get the gist of it quickly enough. Looking back at it now I think I’d like to make it into a comic book if I can find anyone to draw it.

Post here and I’ll email it to you.

Thanks in advance if anyone takes me up on the offer :).

I have been a fan of Sci-fi for years and I’d be honored to take a look.

Awesome, thanks. Where should I send it?

And make hubby read it too - he’s the sci fi authority in the family - I’ve only just started reading the vampire/werewolf stuff by Charlene Harris and Kelly Armstrong.

My email is either in my profile, or on hubby’s website somewhere.

Olive

To my email via my public profile. Thanks

Sent, thanks!

It doesn’t seem to be listed :confused:

I’d like to give it a look, too. E-mail is picunurse@comcast.net

I’d like to read it; my email address is in my profile.

I’ll read it – but be warned: I can be very brutal.

I’d be happy to read it. Email’s in my profile.

I’d love to read it. Please email it via my profile.

I’d be glad to.

Send it to the e-mail addy in my profile. Put SDMB in the title so that the mail filters will let it pass.

Sorry, don’t understand. Try nicnancy @ gmail.com please.

Cisco, check your e-mail.

Ok, I think I’ve sent it to everyone who has posted so far. Thanks for the feedback guys.

I would love to read it. camigi @ gmail.com

Sent, thanks.

OP: Please ignore the email I sent you about not being able to view the file. I got it opened today.
Never mind!
Will reply as soon as I can.

Eh? I never got an email from you. Are you sure you sent it to the address that I sent the file from?

Yes.