Solid prose: O'Brian reader looking for recommendations

I find that reading Patrick O’Brians books is like carving off pieces of a solid block of delicious cheese; or indeed like any kind of hearty meal, except that at the end of it, one’s hunger has not abated, but grown.

There are quite few authors I would put in the same category, in terms of pure narrative solidity; a quality I find has little to do with a masterful grasp of language (although O’Brian has that, too) or suspenseful plots (ditto – even reading about Jack Aubrey’s children or Stephen Maturin’s beetles is fascinating stuff). Indeed one of the pleasures in discovering O’Brian was the subversively ramshackle structure, subplot upon subplot, of his novels, the way they seem less like stories with subplots than subplots with a story; and how well he hides his myriad of themes in the cracks and nooks of his plain prose, and how they’re rarely visible except in the aggregate. Profundity is something you can rarely intentionally aim at, I find.

Common to these authors is a wonderful honesty and modesty, a lack of pretension, unadorned prose. For example, I have been planning to read Eugenides’ Middlesex, but its artful, artificial opening line (“I was born twice: first, as a baby girl, on a remarkably smogless Detroit day in January of 1960; and then again, as a teenage boy, in an emergency room near Petoskey, Michigan, in August of 1974”) immediately put me off, relegated it to the end of my reading queue, regardless of its probable value. Certainly there is artistry here to be enjoyed, but for me, the prose so often feels constructed, with cleverly-formulated sentences and Big Themes getting in the way of the reading experience.

Most recent or contemporary authors, regrettably, fall into this category. Among the ones that don’t, and whom I consider to be master storytellers, are Terry Pratchett, J. R. R. Tolkien, Rohinton Mistry and William Trevor.

Now that I have stated my preferences, I would like to hear about authors who might be said to be as interesting and readable as the aforementioned. Genre is unimportant to me; I don’t care whether a book is about the Napoleonic wars or missions to Mars, as long as it’s intensely readable.

Don Robertson, and The Ideal Genuine Man in particular. His prose exactly fits your description of O’Brian.

In The Ideal Genuine Man, almost nothing happens in the traditional sense until close to the end of the book, but the writing is so compelling, you just can’t stop reading.

A couple of others – Andrea Barrett’s Voyage of the Narwahl and Laura Argiri’s The God in Flight.

Both of those books were “about” things that normally don’t interest me, but the writing was solid and irresistible.

Very interesting recommendations – thank you.

Unfortunately, I note that The God in Flight and Ideal Genuine Man are both out of print. Being located in Europe, I am forced to look in places such as Amazon Marketplace and Abebooks, both of which charge incredible shipping rates (around $9-11 per book). Does anyone know a cheaper way to get these in Europe?

My gosh, I just checked Amazon UK and someone’s asking 44.95 (pounds) for The God in Flight. !!! Holy moly.

I did see a copy of The Ideal Genuine Man for .80, that’s more reasonable.

I’d be glad to send you my copy of The God in Flight – I have more books than space.

e-mail me at gearhart@wmtel.net with your address, and I’ll send it off. I’ve sent books to Australia and Denmark, and the rates were pretty good. I’d be tickled to know that someone else has read this remarkable book.

Yes, seems rather excessive.

That’s incredibly nice of you. I would hesitate to accept this offer unless I could send something in return, however. Have you read A Fine Balance by Rohinton Mistry?

I haven’t, but I’ve heard good things about it. Trade?

gentle, I still don’t really understand what it is about those authors that attract you. I would ascribe to O’Brian the ability to tell a good story without too many rhetorical flourishes, but I wouldn’t say that his writing style in itself makes his books worth reading. Can you clarify a bit?

If we’re talking about the beauty of words and an author’s ability to fixate their readers, no matter what the plot, I don’t think you could go past Annie Proulx (try Postcards or The Shipping News) or Vikram Seth (An Equal Music). I wish I had a tenth of the talent of those guys.

It’s an incredible book by a consistently interesting writer. I’ll send you an email!

I’m always delighted when I find an author whose work contains “honesty and modesty, a lack of pretension, unadorned prose”. Particularly the “unadorned prose” bit! I also like plot; I’d never go near a book like Ulysses simply because I want something exciting to happen.

You might like to try Derek Robinson. He writes mostly about RAF fighter squadrons in the 1st and 2nd World Wars. Goshawk Squadron got him nominated for a Booker Prize, and Piece of Cake (the only book I’ve ever gone straight back to the start to re-read when I got to the end!) is undoubtedly his masterpiece. In terms of characterisation, dialogue and plot, Robinson is flawless.

(Example of a sticks-in-the-mind scene: the squadron in Piece of Cake have just gone through a terrible day in the skies over France, so they go for a meal in a local restaurant and get utterly smashed to try to recover. The bill is huge and they try to pay for it with a dead pilot’s chequebook. As they’re leaving, they get accosted by the maitre d’ and his bouncers. The maitre d’ asks the squadron leader who is the cheque’s owner. The squadron leader’s French fails him when he wearily tries to explain.
“Il est mort. Yesterday - what is yesterday in French?”
“Hier, m’sieur”.
“Il est mort hier. And Smith est mort aujourd’hui. And more of us will be mort demain.”
At which point the maitre d’ rips up the cheque, and says that for defending France, he is forever in their debt.
This is all from memory, so it’s not exact. But it’s a typical bit of Robinson, FWIW)

If you like Patrick O’Brian (and why wouldn’t anyone like his books?), you might like Bernard Cornwell. He’s a historical novelist, and his best-known series of books is set in more or less the same period of time, although whereas O’Brian is writing about Navy life, Cornwell is writing about Army life.

He’s not quite the writer that O’Brian was, but he’s good, and if you’ve got an affinity for that subject matter, you’ll like Cornwell.