Song lyrics with poetic quality

I’ve had a soft spot for the Patti Smith/Bruce Springsteen song, “Because the Night.” Bruce had trouble with it, was dissatisfied with how it was progressing, so he gave it to Patti. I’ll just quote a short section to stay within Fair Use constraints, but the linked video has them all.

With love we sleep
With doubt the vicious circle
Turn and burns
Without you I cannot live
Forgive, the yearning burning
I believe it’s time, too real to feel
So touch me now, touch me now, touch me now
Because the night belongs to lovers

Yeah, Patti and Bruce are both poets.

Laura Nyro, December’s Boudoir

December will bear our affair,
Running on streets of delight and Decemberry ice.

But a lot of Laura Nyro qualifies. I’ve long had a special fondness for The Confession:

Oh I hate my winsome lover
Tell him I’ve had others at my breast
But tell him he’s held my heart
And only now am I a virgin
I confess, I confess

Another from Paul Simon, The Boxer, sung by Simon and Garfunkel and released in 1969:

Asking only workman’s wages
I come looking for a job
But I get no offers
Just a come-on from the whores on Seventh Avenue
I do declare there were times when I was so lonesome
I took some comfort there

I often quote the second line here, bolded, to tell people to get back in the ring and take another swing back at life when it hits you hard. From Angus and Malcolm Young and Brian Johnson of AC/DC, the rock classic You Shook Me All Night Long:

Had to cool me down to take another round
Now I’m back in the ring to take another swing
That the walls were shaking, the Earth was quaking
My mind was aching and we were making it

And you shook me all night long

I LOVE AC/DC, but they are no Dylan or Cohen :joy:. They are just more… explicit. Though I love me some juicy Bon Scott lyrics.

Oh the night came undone like a party dress
And fell at her feet in a beautiful mess
The smoke and the whiskey came home in her curls
And they crept through the dreams of the barroom girls

Barroom Girls. Gillian Welch

If language were liquid
It would be rushing in
Instead here we are
In a silence more eloquent
Than any word could ever be

-Suzanne Vega

Gentle on My Mind - Glenn Campbell

“All I wanna do is have a little fun before I die”
Says the man next to me out of nowhere
It’s apropos of nothing, he says his name is William
I’m sure he’s Bill or Billy or Mac or Buddy
And he’s plain ugly to me
And I wonder if he’s ever had a day of fun in his whole life

Here’s part of a song with insightful lyrics – at least as good as Dylan’s – and one that had quite an influence on me in my formative years.

When I was in high school, an English teacher, in her quest to make the course more relevant, assigned the class to find song lyrics that were poetic. Try to imagine a 17-year old girl reading this in a totally emotionless voice

Sha-na-na-na, sha-na-na-na-na, ahh-do
Sha-na-na-na, sha-na-na-na-na, ahh-do
Sha-na-na-na, sha-na-na-na-na, ahh-do
Sha-na-na-na, sha-na-na-na-na
Ahh, yip-yip-yip-yip-yip-yip-yip-yip
Mum-mum-mum-mum-mum-mum, get a job
Sha-na-na-na, sha-na-na-na-na

Brice Cockburn has so many little sketches, almost haikus:

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After the rain in the streets light flows like blood
I can just taste salt on the humid wind

Here comes that gasoline
Spreading hungry rainbow over shiny black tar

“After The Rain”

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Sun went down looking like the eye of God
Behind icy mist and stark bare trees
Inside the dim empty cinema two guys in leather jackets
Glance at each other and shiver
‘They never built these places with winter in mind’

After a few more scenes, he ends with:

I wonder if I’ll end up like Bernie in his dream
A displaced person in some foreign border town
Waiting for a train part hope part myth
While the station changes hands
Or just sitting at home growing tenser with the times
Or like that guy in ‘The Seventh Seal’
Watching the newly dead dance across the hills
Or wearing this leather jacket shivering with a friend
While the eye of God blazes at us like the sun…

“How I Spent My Fall Vacation”

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He ends most (all?) of his concerts with a solo acoustic reflection:

All the diamonds in this world
That mean anything to me
Are conjured up by wind and sunlight
Sparkling on the sea

It may not be high art poetry, but I’ve always had a soft spot for country music lyrics.

Sittin’ on the front porch on a summer afternoon
In a straightback chair on two legs, leans against the wall
Watch the kids a’ playin’ with June bugs on a string
And chase the glowin’ fireflies when evenin’ shadows fall
- Dolly Parton

The man who preached the funeral
Said it really was a simple way to die
He laid down to rest one afternoon
And never opened up his eyes
They hired me and Fred and Joe
To dig the grave and carry up some chairs
It took us seven hours
And I guess we must have drunk a case of beer.
- Tom T. Hall

The silence of a falling star
Lights up a purple sky
And as I wonder where you are
I’m so lonesome, I could cry
- Hank Williams

She played tambourine with a silver jingle
And she must have known the word to at least a million tunes,
But the one most requested
By the man she knew as Cowboy
Was the late night benediction at the Y’all Come Back Saloon.
*- Sharon Vaughn

Steve Allen had a comedy routine much like that. (ca, 1960’s)

More Paul and Artie:

Every day’s an endless stream of cigarettes and magazines
But each town looks the same to me, the movies and the factories
And every stranger’s face I see reminds me that I long to be

Homeward bound, I wish I was

This Jimmy Ruffin song just came on the radio on the way to work:

What Becomes of the Brokenhearted?
The roots of love grow all around
But for me they come a-tumblin’ down
Every day heartaches grow a little stronger
I can’t stand this pain much longer
I walk in shadows searching for light
Cold and alone, no comfort in sight
Hoping and praying for someone to care
Always moving and goin’ nowhere
What becomes of the broken-hearted
Who had love that’s now departed?
I know I’ve got to find
Some kind of peace of mind
Help me

Dylan Thomas?

It is spring, moonless night in the small town, starless
and bible-black, the cobblestreets silent and the hunched,
courters’-and-rabbits’ wood limping invisible down to the
sloeblack, slow, black, crowblack, fishingboatbobbing sea.
The houses are blind as moles (though moles see fine to-night
in the snouting, velvet dingles) or blind as Captain Cat
there in the muffled middle by the pump and the town clock,
the shops in mourning, the Welfare Hall in widows’ weeds.
And all the people of the lulled and dumbfound town are
sleeping now.

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… and the moon rose over an open field …

Love that song.

… and we walked off to look for America…