I don’t mean to be a doubting Thomas, but just how many is “plenty”? I went to university (in Ontario, not Alberta, but I don’t think it could be that different.) I saw and proofread and just plain picked up and read a LOT of other kids’ papers, and I never once met a kid who could not at least write very coherently. Not everyone was good at writing academic essays, but I never encountered someone who wrote as badly as you’re describing, not even kids for whom English was a new language. I can’t recall any kids in high school who wrote that badly. Well, maybe one or two. So either I went to school with a truly astounding percentage of eggheads, or you’re just slightly exaggerating the number of high school grads applying to university who cannot write. Or your description’s exaggerrated - I mean, that reads like something from Faulkner.
I don’t doubt that kids’ English skills could stand to be beefed up, but that’s always been true; you can find articles from 20, 30, 40, and 50 years ago in which university authories bitch about the morons they’re being sent from the high schools. My father’s 59, and when he went back to school to get his degree, he wasn’t even within shouting distance of being able to write at a college level. (He did pull it up and got his degree, though.) Not that it was his school’s fault, though, there’s another story there.
Anyway, having honestly examined the issue over the years, I really don’t think kids today are as stupid or as badly educated as the prevailing wisdom would suggest. It’s fashionable for adults to rant and rave about idiot high schoolers - start a thread on it and you’ll get 150 people posting stories of varying accuracy and truthfulness about just how stupid today’s students are. Evidently, as Dave Barry says, the education system was way better when it pumped out the real geniuses who are running and financing this school system. Well, I don’t buy it. I see my fellow adults and the shit they produce, and if I had to honestly state whether kids today are dumber than the current crop of adults must have been when they were in school, I would say “Hell, no. Kids today are as bright and informed as they’ve ever been.”
My young sisters-in-law are in high school and the homework I’ve seen them do seems appropriately tough for their age, and they aren’t geniuses. Katie had some particularly nasty math homework in her Grade 9 class that even I had to think about for a minute before I knew how to solve it, and I have a degree in economics and got good marks in my math courses. (No, I did not do it for her.) My mother’s a teacher and if you ask her if kids are dumber today, she’ll tell you it’s an urban myth and claim they’re actually a bit SMARTER. I personally think the education system, all things considered, is actually doing a reasonably good job. It could be improved, but let’s not get too alarmist.