[QUOTE=Sam Stone]
I’m enjoying the show a lot, but there are certainly a lot of potential traps and pitfalls lurking:
The religion angle. Obviously, the show is attempting to take a stand against the religious right and its chilling effect on TV. But then they have to have a main character who is religious, so they can take shots at the religious right and then duck behind the character for cover by showing her as sympathetic. But that’s exactly the kind of cop-out nod to the religious right that the show within a show is fighting against. So that seems hypocritical to me.
Second, I have a fear that they’re going to try to ‘balance’ religion by showing Matt as a religious bigot who broke up with his girlfriend because he thinks all reliious people are KKK members, and the nutjob fundies being bigots on the other side, and Harriet the Christian in the middle as the voice of reason. So far so good, except that it’s possible that the ‘balance’ we’ll see is the kind of ‘realistic portrayal of religion’ you get from a secular Hollywood Liberal - which means every one of the characters could wind up being an annoying stereotype.
The show-within-a-show. The comment above about it getting annoying watching a show about a show we never see is dead on. If we’re spending large chunks of the plot on the creative process and production challenges, we’d better get to see the final product at least occasionally, or it will get annoying. And here’s the problem - it has to be funny. The premise is that these two guys came back to the show because they are God’s gift to comedy. For that to work, we’d better see some actual flashes of comedic brilliance on the show-within-a-show. We have to wish that we could actually watch that show before we start really caring about the people who make it. Now, there’s some hope here - D.L Hughley and Nate Corddry are funny guys. Perhaps they’ll get someone like Rob Corddry to actually write some of the comedy stuff. But if they flub the comedy, the show won’t be believable. And if they solve the problem by never showing the comedy, it will suck.
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I pretty much agree with everything her. What annoys me about the Christian character is not that she’s a Christian but that she’s a “Christian.” It seems contrived. It’s like she’s only there so the show can’t be accused of being anti-Christian if it ever takes shots at the religious right (or if they ever show “Crazy Christians” which it looks like they won’t). I think it could be interesting to show some conflict between a cynical atheist (Matt) and a thoughtful, non-crazy Christian (Harry) but she’s going to actually have to show some philosophical depth and let us know why she’s a Christian (IOW, let her defend herself theologically once in a while) instead of just being a “Christian” in quotation marks whose religion is characterized by nothing more than a bland, theologically generic (and “tolerant”) prayer every episode. She doesn’t have to be a right-winger or a fundie but she DID go on the 700 Club and she must have known what she was endorsing by doing that. I don’t like the way the show is setting her up to be above criticism by avoiding letting her ever express a genuinely controversial view. If they want her to be a liberal Christian then why did she go on the 700 Club? She could actually do some good for liberal Christians if she were ever shown condemning the Pat Robertsons of the world and disavowing herself of them. I fear that any phiolsophical conflict between Matt and Harry will consist of shallow contempt by the atheist (where he just doesn’t like Christians but doesn’t show any real knowledge of the subject or depth of thought on skepticism) and subtly sanctimonious “tolerance” by Harriet. They really should make her be wrong sometimes – not all the time, and they don’t have to make her ridiculous – but they should at least let Matt ask her a question she can’t answer once in a while or maybe even express an unpopular opinion. My guess is that the only controversial “Christian” opinion she’ll ever express will be that she’s pro-life, which is really pretty safe. Much safer than making her a creationist, for instance, or making her say anything against gay rights.
I also totally agree that the show within the show has to be funny or it will undercut the credibility of the drama around it. If the characters are all talking about the brilliance of a sketch that we can plainly see is lame, then it starts to become a huge elephant in the room for the drama.
I know it seems like there’s been too much build up for the CC sketch to live up to expectations but I think you could have the show deal with that by having the chraracters comment on it themselves. Have Matt say that he wrote the sketch in an hour with no expectation that it was going to be anything special or important and have him worry that the audience will find it to be a letdown. If it turns out to be basically a harmless bit of fluff to which the network had a ridiculous overreaction, that would work for the drama.
Incidentally, what kind of mental images do people have of the sketch? Personally, I picture something like that Wife Swap woman who was always screeching that everything was “ungodly” who tore up her check – nothing necessarily insightful, just a couple of broad caricatures (like a married couple or something) going to a grocery store or a movie or whatever (I see it as a running sketch with the same two characters in different settings every time) and then going beserk about “ungodliness.” It could be written in such a way as to appear funny and silly but ultimately much ado about nothing. I think that’s the direction they should have gone.